Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 04/18/08 4:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

I don't think that Hermionie doing Ron's homework was realistic (she'd "correct" it but not copy their handwriting), but I think that her attidude when they noticed the spiders running away was perfect.

I also think that Harry getting out of the hospital wing requires a little more explaination, but overall a good light story.

Reviewer: Ophelia Quinn
Date: 04/17/08 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

A good read. I can imagine this being a scene from the books.

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I don't usually write Trio fics because I end up making them all very one-dimensional; I need more minor characters to experiment with. But this story was just very light so I figured I could go anywhere I liked, and I"m glad it turned out so well! Thanks again!

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