I don't think that Hermionie doing Ron's homework was realistic (she'd "correct" it but not copy their handwriting), but I think that her attidude when they noticed the spiders running away was perfect.
I also think that Harry getting out of the hospital wing requires a little more explaination, but overall a good light story.
A good read. I can imagine this being a scene from the books.
Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I don't usually write Trio fics because I end up making them all very one-dimensional; I need more minor characters to experiment with. But this story was just very light so I figured I could go anywhere I liked, and I"m glad it turned out so well! Thanks again!