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Name: dreamsnape (Signed) · Date: 05/02/15 22:28 · For: Chapter 9- An Impossible Position
Wow, a Quidditch match and a good one, too. I'm impressed. It was exciting, and I was sort of on the edge of my seat to see what would happen. Well done. I also like how Severus and Lily experience all these emotions and go through some slow' gradual changes. The story keeps getting better.

Name: dreamsnape (Signed) · Date: 04/18/15 1:16 · For: Chapter 2- Predestination
I'm enjoying this story. I like how you get deep into Severus' thoughts and feelings, which seem pretty accurate. I'm curious to see where he will go from here.

Name: dreamsnape (Signed) · Date: 04/18/15 1:16 · For: Chapter 2- Predestination
I'm enjoying this story. I like how you get deep into Severus' thoughts and feelings, which seem pretty accurate. I'm curious to see where he will go from here.

Name: Brimstone (Signed) · Date: 08/10/14 22:02 · For: Chapter 17- Dirty Old Town
It was really impressive to see Snape's growth throughout the story. He starts out so pitiable and angsty, but he seems to be becoming more and more empowered. Even if he never gets with Lily he has grown so much as a person that he's far better off than in canon.

I wonder if you were setting up for a LEJP and SSMM interlude. I just can't see Lily being attracted to Snape when he follows her around like a lost puppy all the time. He needs to be forced to get over her.

Name: sarcasticval (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 1:41 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
I beg of you, please please PLEASE don't let this story be abandoned. It is truly one of the best Snape fics I've ever read. I still check it all the time in hopes of an update.

Name: Lon Wolfgood (Signed) · Date: 10/11/12 13:33 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
Wow! 16 more days and it'll be a year since the last chapter!

The sad part is that I load this page daily to see if it was updated, since there are no alerts in this website. Or maybe I just don't know how to use this. Ha!

Any chance of this being uploaded to FFNet or AO3?


Name: Charles Sinclair (Signed) · Date: 08/08/12 6:54 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
I hope that you haven't entirely abandoned this? (Though as the writer and of several incomplete chapters of an unpublished story I can understand how you might).

It is still the best thing that I've come across in a long while, and I still have the chapters saved to an external drop-box. As I may have said before, the ethos of the story puts me in mind of Atonement; and you balance a brilliant tightrope walk between the desirable and believeable. Its quite satisfying to have some closure in this manner.

All the best, and I'll keep periodically checking under Authors for updates!


ps 'Dirty old Town' - a 'The Pogues' reference?

Name: Phoenix Song114 (Signed) · Date: 06/21/12 3:41 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
Hmmmmm interesting....cliffhanger! Haha nice!

Name: Phoenix Song114 (Signed) · Date: 06/21/12 3:30 · For: Chapter 17- Dirty Old Town
Hahahaha nice one, Lily. :) Love that girl.

Name: crissiferrobin (Signed) · Date: 06/03/12 21:05 · For: Chapter 1- The End of the World
This is my favorite story! hank you for bein brilliant!

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 05/29/12 5:58 · For: Chapter 1- The End of the World
Oh what to say? I absolutely adore this story and I especially love your characterization of Snape. I feel like he and Lily really do deserve to be together, because of the way you have written them. Oh please up date this story!!!!! This is going into my favorites, and I would love it if this story could actually be finished, too. You have such a fluent writing style and you are able to get into the characters' heads really well! I feel like I understand and appreciate them all a little more. :D So please continue this story!!!!

Name: Lon Wolfgood (Signed) · Date: 05/07/12 23:13 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
By the way, I forgot to mention, that I really liked the professor and how he helped Severus.

Name: Lon Wolfgood (Signed) · Date: 05/07/12 23:08 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
Loved this update. Still the best SSLE story by far.

Name: Sariana (Signed) · Date: 02/09/12 1:22 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
Somehow I missed that you had updated! I'm glad to see you back. I'm really curious as to where this story is going. I hope your writer's block is gone for good.

Name: Darkmond (Signed) · Date: 02/07/12 22:17 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
Hmm... This is a hard thing to write a comment to a fanfiction.
I rarely do it, cause what can you actually write to a thing, that you simply find “AWESOME”?
You must admit that it’s rather quite a poor comment even though that’s exactly what I think about your work. I rarely find or have the occasion to read something, and I mean here even books, that have such an impact on me and gives me so much excitement while reading, as your story. It’s just a fanfiction, but I actually have the feeling that you give Rowling’s characters the depth I was missing in her books. That your story revolves around my favorite character in HP have surely something to do with me picking your story to read… But the fact that even the point of view of characters I previously despised, or simply found boring, got my utmost interest... I have to say, that this really shows a talent of a great writer. Just to view such things, to makes them present and visible, this really shows how much potential you have. Cause it’s really hard to make it this way, despite what others think.
I have this habit, that while I read a FF I underline the parts that I find the best, it’s either witty dialogs, responses, interesting situations and descriptions and any parts that I on my part find quite inventive, outstanding, or just simply well written. It would surprise you how many parts are underlined in your work.
I will buy your book, if you ever have one. Without any hesitation. It would be worth solely for your deep psychological insight.
I was wondering if you ever thought of it, if you tried to think of any story yourself.
Unfortunately there are no such sites in which people can post their own stories, mostly cause of the author’s rights that could be violated. A pity though… I’m sure many people could discover their gifts this way…
But coming back to “Snivellus and the Head Girl”, I’m always full of fear considering the great FF works, that one day the author just stops continue writing them. It takes so much time and work, after all. I really hope you’ll have the strength and determination to finish this FF without the need to let it down in the middle.
And I really hope that you’ll try to write something by yourself.
Be assured that I and all your fans on Mugglenet and FanFictionNet will continue to support you and keep reading this great fanfiction till the very end. I’m sure that no one is able to stop doing so, after getting familiar with this fantastic story.
Keep writing, and have a lot of fun doing it,
With kind regards,


Name: FwooperFeathers (Signed) · Date: 10/30/11 2:38 · For: Chapter 1- The End of the World
WOW. You are truly an AMAZING writer. I can totally imagine all of this--and you do a great job depicting the characters!

Name: jkjim (Signed) · Date: 10/29/11 20:20 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
Yay update!! Release the Mongoose!!!.

Please kill the marauders

Name: lunalicious (Signed) · Date: 10/29/11 19:33 · For: Chapter 18- First Day
I'm enjoying this story and can't wait to read what comes next. :)

Name: Minerva67 (Signed) · Date: 10/28/11 18:32 · For: Chapter 1- The End of the World
Yaaaaaay A new installment of my favorite fanfic. This was a good transition chapter. I am sure many at Hogwarts would wonder why James Potter, of all people, would be selected as Head Boy. You have explained well the dearth of talent in the upper years of the school. Also I like seeing the story from James's POV----but don't give us too much of that. You do have to give James credit for some talents. He is popular with some students, certainly has athletic and academic skills, but assumes that everything will come to him. His bullying probably caused more by his privileged life and thoughtlessness, rather than a basic meanness and recklessness. Good for James to finally realize that he has to change his attitudes

Name: Lon Wolfgood (Signed) · Date: 09/17/11 23:02 · For: Chapter 17- Dirty Old Town
This is the best Sev/Lily story I've read. I hope you continue it! :)

Author's Response: I'm still working on it! I've just been sidetracked for a while. More soon, I hope, and thank you!

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