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Reviews For Male Bonding

Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 02/28/10 12:38 · For: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD! I LOVE it! I'm like... obsessed with Sirius and James and the Maruader Era, and when I saw this story I knew I just had to read it! Brava! I loved it!

Name: Winnyy (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 15:22 · For: Chapter 1

This is great!

I especially like the part where Peter hexes Bella ;)

Name: Cwiddy (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 21:34 · For: Chapter 1
This is an interesting take on Sirius's first couple days at Hogwarts. I do think that the first years wouldn't have been quite so all knowing about things...such as what house they would go in, how the sorting was done, where the kitchens were and what not...I have to admit I always saw them finding the secrets out for themselves...with each other, of the secrets adding to their bonds of friendship.

I do have to admit that points of view on issues out of the way, this is well written.

Name: APaddyFan (Signed) · Date: 04/20/08 19:26 · For: Chapter 1
Yeah, its a little rough around the edges, but a good concept. Next time you might add a bit more description and slow down the pace a little. A bunch of things were happening at once without very many pauses. Other then that it was great, your idea was excelent.

Name: quibblequill (Signed) · Date: 04/20/08 2:29 · For: Chapter 1
Little rough around the edges, but nice nonetheless... I rather enjoyed a change in perspective. XD

Name: Nivnami (Signed) · Date: 04/18/08 23:01 · For: Chapter 1
Yay!! Very nice story. I really REALLY enjoyed reading it. I hope you continue to write such awesome stories!


Name: Minna_Black (Signed) · Date: 04/18/08 22:09 · For: Chapter 1

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