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Reviewer: Sk8erChick
Date: 03/08/09 0:39
Chapter: one-shot

whoa, i seriously luved the words u used in that fic. wowie wow wow!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/09/08 21:22
Chapter: one-shot

Another brilliant one shot. I love how Ginny is alot more grown up than many of the others, and how she drew on her own experiences to comfort Harry and make him see the truth. And I'm guessing here, but he'd probably feel alot better sharing the burden. You've really shown Ginny's true character here, she did turn out to be strong and brave in canon and you've continued that here. Very well done.

Reviewer: pathseekerme
Date: 06/07/08 1:50
Chapter: one-shot

Extremely well written for a first-timer! Good job!!

Reviewer: lillylover77
Date: 07/15/07 12:04
Chapter: one-shot

AW how sweet! ur a really good author

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/28/06 22:38
Chapter: one-shot

Alright, a little lacking in the romance department. Also, the ending almost makes it sound like the last battle happens and one/both of them dies.
Other than that minor confusion, very good! ; )

Reviewer: JessC
Date: 11/23/06 21:26
Chapter: one-shot

did u realize it says cedric in the beginning??

Author's Response: Yes. If you reread the paragraph what it is saying is that after cedric's death harry was a mess (think very mad and very loud harry at the beginning of ootp) but that that harry was nothing to this new, upset harry. meaning, he was even madder and louder. this was written a long long long time ago, pre hbp and with the idea that harry would be a mess at the beginning but ginny would help him out of it.

Reviewer: JessC
Date: 11/23/06 21:26
Chapter: one-shot

did u realize it says cedric in the beginning??

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 10/17/06 20:08
Chapter: one-shot

it was okay not bad harry was a bit too soft

Reviewer: kaddaline_hp_13
Date: 10/08/06 10:15
Chapter: one-shot

aww... sad.... but it was still good! nice job!

Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 06/17/06 16:20
Chapter: one-shot

I don't know what to think really! It was a good story, made sense, and Ginny was in it! But I think it would have been better to have Ginny and Harry get little closer or make it a little longer.

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 05/01/06 19:47
Chapter: one-shot

This is a wonderful fic. When Harry and Ginny are having their argument, could you please put a space between no and one. Thanks! The part that liked best was when Harry told her the secret. It let's the reader know that they have come to a place of trust.

Reviewer: james and lily fan
Date: 02/09/06 17:01
Chapter: one-shot

wow great job!

Reviewer: LunaLovegoodDoubleCast
Date: 06/29/05 14:00
Chapter: one-shot

Love as always...

Reviewer: GwenSandyhill
Date: 04/07/05 16:08
Chapter: one-shot

really good! I found that everyone was kept in character, and the dialogue was amazing!

Reviewer: nagem
Date: 04/03/05 16:42
Chapter: one-shot

cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great for a first fic!!!!!!! noone is spelled NO ONE

Reviewer: Trisana
Date: 03/20/05 17:23
Chapter: one-shot

Are you sure this was your first fiction story? because you sure as hell fooled i've been saying you are a wonderful writer...i love it...gotta go read more..toodles

Reviewer: hpgurl2121
Date: 03/02/05 18:12
Chapter: one-shot

THIS was your first fan fic?! man, i'm envious! my first fan fic sucked so much i had to delete it! lol! but not yours! oh, no, your first fan fic rocked! it may not have been very "romantic", but that is exactly the way i always pictured those two getting together! harry getting angry, ginny telling him off, lots of tears, and a bittersweet ending. i loved it, in case you couldn't tell! lol!

Reviewer: alk05
Date: 02/21/05 14:35
Chapter: one-shot

it was so cute, i like how they dont just start kissing, but it hints that they might later!

Reviewer: winky36
Date: 02/17/05 20:14
Chapter: one-shot

I thought it was really well-thought out and explained. It was really sweet, and even though they don't "get together" you know they will. It was a perfect ending.

Reviewer: Harlem
Date: 02/05/05 20:40
Chapter: one-shot

Wow, this was really good. There were a few errors and things that could have been made better, but for a first fanfic, this was amazing! I envy you!

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