Reviewer: A Arias
Date: 07/03/08 17:26
Chapter: Severus: It Should Have Been
Your short stories are great. If you made a novel one day you probably would make up the best ending ever!
Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 05/14/08 3:28
Chapter: Severus: It Should Have Been
Very well written. I think that you show Severus' feelings very well, and the ending is well written.
Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 05/14/08 3:18
Chapter: Lily: It Doesn't Make Any Difference
I enjoyed this chapter. I like that Lily ran into James and thought to ask him about the resistance. I also think that Lily having a hard time thinking of Severus as Snape was very realistic.
Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 05/13/08 22:25
Chapter: Severus: It Should Have Been
Very nice story, sad, with regards to Severus. Time does not always heal old wounds. I think he realizes that now.
And if he had'nt called her a mudblood, he would be holding Lily in his arms and kissing her, instead of James.
Very nice story.
Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 7:36
Chapter: Lily: It Doesn't Make Any Difference
Wowee!
This is great!=]
Aw..Snape made such a stupid, stupid mistake..=[
Reviewer: Nivnami
Date: 04/20/08 14:00
Chapter: Lily: It Doesn't Make Any Difference
CMON!!!! PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!! IVE ADDED THIS STORY TO MY FAVORITES!!!!! I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!
Reviewer: Nivnami
Date: 04/17/08 22:09
Chapter: Lily: It Doesn't Make Any Difference
Wow! I really REALLY enjoyed reading this story. You nhave done an awesome job eith Lily and James' character. I am earegly waiting for the updation of the next chapter. 10/10 for such an awesome story!!! I feel that you have a lot of talent at writing and I sincerely hope that you continue to write such awesome stroies!
ALL THE BEST!!!!
Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 04/17/08 14:18
Chapter: Lily: It Doesn't Make Any Difference
Aww! Very nice, it seemed so real. Nice job with the repetition of "It doesn't matter"; having the difference between Snape and James say it was a nice point.
Great job!
