Reviews For Innocence
Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 06/20/08 10:19
Chapter: Forever

"...She would kiss my tears and my scars, hold my hand when I panicked. Lily would make me get out of the house and go to the grocery with her for spaghetti and milk. James would rag the hell out of me until I got ‘normal’, and whack the side of my bony, pale arm until it bruised- but in a satisfying, best-friend sort of way. " I liked this paragraph. I've actually journaled something similar to this about my firends when I was having a rough time. This is un poco (a little) depressing, but written well!

Author's Response: thank you.

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/03/08 15:32
Chapter: Forever

Oh my God...
Poor Sirius!=[

The Marauders story is so sad and tragic! And heart breaking, and devastating...=[
Great idea though!=]

Author's Response: yeah, because you never really know who sirius has loved (romantically) i think it's important to show that part of him. I think the reason he's so harsh later, is not only b/c of azcaban, but because he lost the people he loved best in the word, including the love of his life. glad you liked it

Reviewer: Nivnami
Date: 04/20/08 14:04
Chapter: Forever

Nice story! You've done a great job with Sirius' character! I am a die-hard Marauder fan and I have really REALLY enjoyed reading this story. I sincerely believe that you have a lot of talent at writing and I am eagerly awaiting many more of your awesome stories!

ALL THE BEST!!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much! your review really means a lot to me...the story was hard to get perfect, and semi-painful because I really felt I did get inside Sirius's head. so anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!! =]

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