Well written first chapter! Hope that you update soon!

Great Start!!! Update Soon!!

Really great start! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Fi :-)

good story! the next chapter should be interesting.

I am very intrigued and can't wait to read the rest. Great writing, I thought there were no flaws. This one is going to my faves!

I really liked it. Please keep up the work. I want to see what happens next!

I like it so far. It's a good first chapter. You might work on the dialogue a bit. The main thing that popped out at me was Ginny's use of "oh gosh!" I can count the number of times I've heard someone use the word gosh, for something other than comedic effect, on the fingers of one hand. Any other time, the person was exceedingly prudish, and the words they chose to use in place of expletives were jarring and sounded out of place. There is nothing with keeping your language clean, ut consider whether or not the character you are writing would use that word or phrase. If a character speaks in a manner that is out of character for them, it stands out like a sore thumb. I'm far from perfect in this area, and if dialogue that doesn't sound quite right is the worst a reviewer can say about your work, then that's pretty good. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Pretty good!