Lovely drabble, I thought you penned Lily's thoughts wonderfully. The part with the saying that no parent should have to bury their child is beautiful. Nothing really to criticize on other than to keep writing like this! Thank you.

Very sweet.

One error though:

I look at you and I take in your smart suit that is so completely muggle I am a bit shocked, as well the fact that it looks like you tried to tame your hair.

The 'Muggle' should have a capital M. Otherwise, it was perfect! 

lovelovelove :)

omg, i loved it. really. it made me cry which is a good thing, i promise. thanks much

awww, I love this story. Very well written.