Lovely drabble, I thought you penned Lily's thoughts wonderfully. The part with the saying that no parent should have to bury their child is beautiful. Nothing really to criticize on other than to keep writing like this! Thank you.
Aw! That's SO sad but I adored it sooo much. I'd be crying but my brother's right there >.<
Why was I just randomly reminded of my favorite TV show?
One error though:
I look at you and I take in your smart suit that is so completely muggle I am a bit shocked, as well the fact that it looks like you tried to tame your hair.
The 'Muggle' should have a capital M. Otherwise, it was perfect!
Great, touching story. You really captured all emotion.
wow! that was so good! i
omg, i loved it. really. it made me cry which is a good thing, i promise. thanks much
OH, it's so sad, but so sweet!
awww, I love this story. Very well written.
AWwwwwwwwwww!! Such a sweet story. I really enjoyed reading it. You should continue to write such awesome Lily/James fics.
ALL THE BEST!!!!