Reviews For And You Were There
Reviewer: goldensunshine
Date: 04/01/11 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely drabble, I thought you penned Lily's thoughts wonderfully. The part with the saying that no parent should have to bury their child is beautiful. Nothing really to criticize on other than to keep writing like this! Thank you.

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/23/08 20:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw! That's SO sad but I adored it sooo much. I'd be crying but my brother's right there >.<

Why was I just randomly reminded of my favorite TV show?

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 06/05/08 8:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very sweet.

One error though:

I look at you and I take in your smart suit that is so completely muggle I am a bit shocked, as well the fact that it looks like you tried to tame your hair.

The 'Muggle' should have a capital M. Otherwise, it was perfect! 

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 05/12/08 14:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great, touching story. You really captured all emotion.

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 05/02/08 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

lovelovelove :)

Reviewer: girl_in_love
Date: 05/02/08 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow! that was so good! i

Reviewer: Cesea
Date: 04/30/08 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

omg, i loved it. really. it made me cry which is a good thing, i promise. thanks much

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 04/22/08 20:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

OH, it's so sad, but so sweet!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 04/21/08 23:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww, I love this story. Very well written.

Reviewer: Nivnami
Date: 04/21/08 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

AWwwwwwwwwww!! Such a sweet story. I really enjoyed reading it. You should continue to write such awesome Lily/James fics.

ALL THE BEST!!!!

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