Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 10/18/08 23:55
Chapter: Envy

I love your potrayal of a young Aberforth. It's very similar to the older man he grows to be while still retaining some younger qualities. That can be very hard to do, but you're pulling it off fabulously so far. I love how he writes. "As thin as . . . a really thin thing." That is my new favorite similie. =] Anyway, I'll be watching for a new chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Updates soon hopefully!

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 03/27/08 14:23
Chapter: Envy

This is a response to your response, so sorry if it's annoying for it to be here but..
yeah, I think it's cool the way people can swap languages, like (on a good da) I can think in germish, which is my own special version of German, involving quite a few English words with "lich" stuck on the end. Also, when I had an exchange student she said that by the end of the week she was dreaming in English. I know that all this is really random, but it just occurred to me, and I wanted to tell you the thoughts that your story inspired lol. Maybe I think like Aberforth - think a thing, have ask/report it.

Author's Response: This is very interesting, thank you for telling me.rnrnAlso, I like the word germish. At my school we are taught spanglish and franglais. I thought I was the only person who mixed names of languages together! I hope you don't mind me using the word germish from now on?

Reviewer: LoonyXBird
Date: 03/22/08 15:03
Chapter: Envy

I like it a lot. I can't wait to read more. Having it from Aberforth's point of view is really interesting. Keep on writing! ......oh yeah please!

Author's Response: see below

Reviewer: LoonyXBird
Date: 03/22/08 15:02
Chapter: Envy

I like it a lot. I can't wait to read more. Having it from Aberforth's point of view is really interesting. Keep on writing! ......oh yeah please!

Author's Response: There will about six more chapters, so plenty more soon!!!!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 03/22/08 11:51
Chapter: Envy

I think this story is great. Poor Aberforth, always in the backround. Please write more. How did the brothers reach an agreement? Please update!

Author's Response: Reach an agreement on what? I think you mean generally, in which case there's usually a compromise. Usually. Or maybe you meant that as a rhetorical question...rnrnThanik you for reading!!!

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 03/21/08 10:14
Chapter: Envy

Very good. I'm adding this to my favourites. Why did Aberforth want to know if Albus dreamt in mermish?

Author's Response: It was a thought that occured to Aberforth randomly, if people who know foreign languages dream in them. Incidentally, my Spanish teacher says she can dream in Spanish or Italian.rnrnThanks for reading!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 03/20/08 17:53
Chapter: Envy

I really like it so far! I love stories about that summer (of 1899 or whenever) and I think it's really interesting that your's is from Aberforth's point of view. I loved the running-jokey thing of knocking. ;)

I'm excited to see where this goes (plus, I think it's inspiring me to write my own version of that summer...though I can already tell yours will most likely be better).

Author's Response: Thanks for reveiwing!!! If you write your version I'll read it!

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