Reviews For Mum
Reviewer: Wizardora
Date: 03/25/08 5:34
Chapter: Mum

Aw! That was so beautiful! I had a little tear at the end!

Hey, just checking out your story! A banner will be on it's way shortly!

Lv Wizardora

Author's Response: Thank you! You are an incredible bannermaker (for all reading this REQUEST FROM HER!!!!!) and since I got emotion out of you, I think the banner will be even more wonderful! Hugs, Lexi

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 03/23/08 17:44
Chapter: Mum

this is a really beautiful poem. It's amazing. It was emotional, and I could feel the character's sadness.

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: Thank you! Man, I feel so redundant saying thank you. But that's all I can find to say to you wonderful reviewers! Lexi

Reviewer: BertieBotsBeans741
Date: 03/23/08 13:16
Chapter: Mum

You did a wonderful job with all the rhyming, I couldn't pull that off. This was a nice little poem, I enjoyed it immensely.

Brittany

Author's Response: Thank you! The inspiration came from a sad and unfortunate place, but I hope my friend at least enjoys this a little bit. Thanks again!rnrnLexi

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