Reviewer: harrynutter
Date: 12/22/10 7:23
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

Wow, that was very interesting. Thanks for posting this.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 07/26/10 16:19
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

very good. i can totally image crabbe doing that, and his confusion as to why harry was not in the rafters as well was priceless. awesome writing! =D

Author's Response: Thank you!! This was very different for me to write, and I'm glad it's gotten such a positive response!

Reviewer: Hope for Tomorrow
Date: 03/26/08 16:55
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

An interesting change of pace from most of the other Battle stories. I love the way you characterized the deceased as they realized and reacted to their own deaths. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: draco_roxmysox
Date: 03/26/08 15:07
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

This was really well written. And an interesting change of tune. I'd have never thought to write about Crabbe of all people. The idea was brilliant! Very, very awesome : )

Author's Response: Why thank you!! I can't take credit for the idea - it was a challenge on another Harry Potter site I visit and I decided to try my hand at it. I'm glad to know I did a good job of it, though!! Thanks so much for reading!!

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 03/26/08 8:18
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

That was really great :D Excellent word choice, and I think Crabbe's point of view was about as dead on as one could get. It was totally worth waiting weeks and weeks to read!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I totally wasn't expecting any reads on this (much less reviews!), so I'm quite pleasantly surprised that it's actually being enjoyed. Thanks so much again!!

Reviewer: MithrilQuill
Date: 03/26/08 8:03
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

Nice! I like the POV you chose and I think you did it really well. And that last line was a great way to end! Thanks for the good read! :D

Author's Response: You are quite welcome! Thanks for the flattering review!!

Reviewer: skippy agogo
Date: 03/26/08 0:18
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

well done. well done indeed.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Tim the Enchanter
Date: 03/25/08 23:40
Chapter: An Hour-Long Existence

On the contrary, this story is not the least random, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I think the confusion and just plain apathy suited Crabbe perfectly.

However, my only complaint about this story is that some details of the battle are out of order. Otherwise, great story!

Tim the Enchanter

Author's Response: Ack, sorry about the continuity issues!! I didn't have DH on hand when I wrote it (opting to trust an increasingly less-than-reliable memory instead...) I'll fix it as soon as I can.rnOtherwise, I'm glad you liked it!

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