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Reviews For Someday I'll Know

Name: Sly One (Signed) · Date: 04/19/08 8:33 · For: Someday......
You desperately need to put the parent's dialogs in italics, or have some other way to differentiate it from what is going on in little Harry's head.

I had to read that one line twice to really catch the gist of it. Just a better separation between the two point of views would push this over the top into being one of my favorites!

So please consider that edit, I know it will help you sell the story to the reader just that one little bit more clearly.

Good luck!

Name: Ginny_Alamalexia (Signed) · Date: 04/19/08 1:06 · For: Someday......
A very touching story.

I love the way that Lily and James are constantly watching over Harry and even in the toughest times they know it will get better.

Beautiful story.

Name: harry_victoria (Signed) · Date: 04/18/08 20:16 · For: Someday......
SOPH! *tacklehugsquishglomplove*

Aww, I'm so touched that you decided to dedicate this to me! You're so sweet, my love. As always, love the story, and please keep up the great work!


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