Reviews For The Final Choice
Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 05/18/08 12:03
Chapter: Chapter 3

I love the way you included canon in this chapter. Sirus suspecting Remus of being the traitor and the reason for the secret keeper switch. I think that you gave a plausible reason for why Sirus spent so much time with James and Lily rather than with Angela and Caine.

I'd like to see a sequel with Angelas reaction to Sirus being sent to Azakaban.

Author's Response: First of all, thanks for reviewing. Yes, I wanted to stick to canon as much as possible. Poor Sirius - he's going to Azkaban again! rnAbout the sequel - the first chapter is already on the site, although it isn't about Angela's reaction for suddenly finding herself married to a prisoner.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/18/08 1:40
Chapter: Chapter 3

hi again,
that was a really great chapter. I was waiting ages for it to come out and now its finally there. Yay. *pat on the back* for all the effort you put into this story. it turned out really great
I think that Its really sad and it gave me goosebumps(in a good way) and it was also very cute. Its one of those fanfics that you could read over and over again and it wouldn't get boring. I think you really got sirius's character spot on and i think that its great how it all fits together as in that sirius really gave up on being the potters secret keeper and told them that peter should be it instead. This is a really clever story. And again. I just love Caine. He is really cute. “Yes!” Caine yelped. “I wanna be a puppy!" that was really cute *squeal*
I also think that Angela is a brilliant character. Please keep writing coz ure really good at it!

Author's Response: Hi, good to know that I haven't disappointed you. I wanted to follow the canon as closely as possible, so I sent Sirius to Azkaban, no matter how bad it felt. And I think that there isn't a single child, who had not dreamed of becoming an animal... rnThe next story is already on this site. See ypu there - at least, I hope I will.

Reviewer: dancingwithneville
Date: 05/14/08 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 3

First off I can't believe it's completed! I really enjoyed this story although the ending just kind of ended if you know what I mean. I can't wait see what else you have written!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Don't worry about the ending, there is another story after this one that will (hopefully) be posted here. That's if I don't receive a refusal based on a wrong category, of course.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 04/30/08 5:04
Chapter: Chapter 2

awwww, thats a sad chapter isnt it
i really like your style of writing. it makes the story really awsome and great. i cant wait for the next chapter. whats gonna happen?
please update real soon. i am amazed that even though you dont use beta's, u stilll have no spelling or grammer mistakes. i wish i could do that but im terrible at those thongs and no betas ever think my stories are good enough to read.
well, anyway, that was an AMAZING chapter
keep writing and updating pleeeese

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, the chapter was sad and the next one is already in the queu, along with another Angela/Sirius humour fic. You'll have to wait and see what happens. rnI must admit that some of my other stories really don't have betas, but this one in particular has one. So, the lack of spelling and grammar mistakes is not entirely my doing. The style, however, is mine and mine alone! I'm flattered that you like it.

Reviewer: CloewithLOVE
Date: 04/28/08 13:49
Chapter: Chapter 2

Sorry for not reviewing in a while! :(

I loved it! Your story was amazing yet again. Please please please please please let Sirius choose his family! :) *big smile* I mean it is an alternate universe! And, please review!


Author's Response: It's good to know that you are still reading. I am afraid that the next chapter has already been written, so you'll have to wait and see what Sirius will choose. *grin* Thanks again.

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 04/28/08 13:09
Chapter: Chapter 2


Seriously, I want more ;)

Author's Response: All right...

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 04/28/08 13:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

I *love* this fic! I simply love it!
Well done!
I can't wait to read the next bit!
Write more sooony!=]

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter is already in the queue.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 04/05/08 2:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh i just had to read this chapter again. and also i just had to give another review as this story deserves more than the one i gave. i think this story is going to be very very good. i really cannot wait for the next chapters. oooh. i really really luuuuurve caine. he is adorable. maby he and harry would be good friends. i also think that, the last sentance was great. you ended the chapter in a way that makes everyone want to really read more. it was a really sad sentance yet it was touching. it was almost like a cliff hanger. yes i think thats what it was. a great cliffhanger ending a great chapter.
congrats again^^
keep writing(please, coz your really really good at it)

Author's Response: Wow! It seems that Angela and Caine have found themselves a new fan. I'm reallty flattered. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 04/05/08 2:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. thats a great first chapter. it really makes me want to read on(please make this possible by updating soon^^). My favorite charecter is definatley Caine. He is sooooooo cute and I think you did an amazing job of giving him all te qualities a little boy would have. I also really like way you made angela stand up for caine saying they should crucio her instead. she was exatly like lily. very brave.
another awsome fic and i cannot wait for the second chapter.
congrats and sorry for the delay in reading this awsome fic.^^
see you in the next review which i am sure i will give.

Author's Response: The next chapter is already in the queue. Glad you liked this one. I like Cane too and I love writing about him, that's why he has a story of his own... hint, hint...

Reviewer: CloewithLOVE
Date: 03/19/08 8:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

continue it please I loved it!

Author's Response: My first reviewer! Thanks. I'm glad you loved my story. Don't worry, the next chapter is already written. I'll submit it for validation in a day or two. Stay tuned!

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