Reviewer: EmmyT
Date: 12/21/10 14:08
Chapter: The Troubles of Time-Tavelling

I really enjoyed this. I've never read a story mostly about Teddy before. It was a good read. However, I feel you rushed the ending slightly, and it may have been better if it was two chapters! Anyway, well done!

Reviewer: Ginny663
Date: 02/25/08 10:36
Chapter: The Troubles of Time-Tavelling

This has the potential to be a really great story. I thought the bit about the dog thing was a little bit out there, and could have been explained more, but everything else was otherwise very good. Keep it up! =)

Author's Response: Oh thank you love :) Yes the little dog like creature. I haven;t the faintest idea where that came from. It just popped in my mind when I recieved the next promot :D Thanks for reviewing though! ~Nicole

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