I really enjoyed this. I've never read a story mostly about Teddy before. It was a good read. However, I feel you rushed the ending slightly, and it may have been better if it was two chapters! Anyway, well done!
This has the potential to be a really great story. I thought the bit about the dog thing was a little bit out there, and could have been explained more, but everything else was otherwise very good. Keep it up! =)
Author's Response: Oh thank you love :) Yes the little dog like creature. I haven;t the faintest idea where that came from. It just popped in my mind when I recieved the next promot :D Thanks for reviewing though! ~Nicole