Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 06/13/08 14:15
Chapter: The Mission

That was an entirely confusing story!  Not bad, but if you made it a chapter longer and actually explained what actually happened and some background it would be much better.  First chapter, not too bad.  2nd chapter, nearly impossible to follow!

Author's Response: *sighs* Yes, I know. I'm sorry! Probably one of the worst stories I've ever written... >.< However, I hope you don't give up on me and try reading some of my other stuff so you know I'm not really horrible. =P (I hope!) Thanks very much for your review.

Reviewer: LunaTuna
Date: 02/22/08 8:31
Chapter: Enid and The Watcher

Good story! I love Luna and this was great!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I find Luna so interesting that I love writing from her point of view. :)

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