That was an entirely confusing story! Not bad, but if you made it a chapter longer and actually explained what actually happened and some background it would be much better. First chapter, not too bad. 2nd chapter, nearly impossible to follow!
Author's Response: *sighs* Yes, I know. I'm sorry! Probably one of the worst stories I've ever written... >.< However, I hope you don't give up on me and try reading some of my other stuff so you know I'm not really horrible. =P (I hope!) Thanks very much for your review.
Good story! I love Luna and this was great!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I find Luna so interesting that I love writing from her point of view. :)