A very gripping story! I was forced to read the entire thing, it was so exciting! It was also very well written except for a few typos:
“and it was totally warn.”
I suppose you mean “worn”?
“Ron quickly put his satchel in front of is face”
I think it should be “his face”?
“having a feeling of dejvu.”
It’s déjà vu, right?
Overall, good story!
Author's Response: AWW! Thanks badger boy! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a fun time writing it and Ron IS my favorite character after all. Keep an eye out for my two new stories coming up! ;)
oh i liked this
this is the first time travel story ive ever read it was really really good really well writen although at first it was a little hard to follow
bellatrix was ppppeeerfect
keep writing great stories!!!!!!
ttfn ta ta for now