Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 04/28/08 2:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW! O_o

That was so cool. I know, of all the descriptive words I could have used to make that adjective more eloquent, I said ‘cool’ because that was the first word that cam to mind.:o

You characterize Tonks amazingly well, Padfoot love. All the sentences in brackets really show off her personality perfectly. I guess when they said you should pick a character you know well, you really did. I just cannot praise your Tonks enough. All the little details, all the quotes and random muggle-inspired habits like flicking a knut (no doubt thanks to her father) really put a fantastically real and original feel to her that I had yet to encounter in a fanfic.

I only have one nitpick and that’s just a typo.:

Of course! Now it made sense. Merlin, Mad-Eye, I better be getting I pay raise.

Also, I adore your cliffhanger. I know its not he best and actually quite common but I’m a sucker like that.:o

The mission that Tonks is set seems quite believable and plausible though I do wonder how you’re going to have her succeed and keep the time stream continuum from messing up.

But other than that, no complaints whatsoever. I’ll get back to this lovely fic and the next chapter just as soon as I can.;)=Sammy

Author's Response:

Sammmmmmyyy! You make this fic seem better than it is :)

rn

I understand about the cliffie part; who doesn't like a bumbling cliche to keep them going?

rn

Thanks so much for your lovely review, dahling!

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 02/23/08 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 5

This is one of my favorite fics ever, I have to tell you. I've been hanging on to the updates for a long time. And speaking of Bellatrix, I'm listening to Helena Bonham Carter and Johnny Depp on my iPod. XD


Like I said before, I love your characterisation of Tonks. I really enjoyed her sarcastic comments and being annoying in general.

And Bellatrix, I liked your portrayal of her too. Especially the hair. I love the hair, XD. She was a bit more compassionate here, and I like it. XD

I love your writing in general, dear, so keep on with your fics! =)

Thanks for writing such a great fic!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much, Hanni! I do love your reviews-- it's nice to see something constructive. I'm really glad you like this fic-- it means a lot :) And thank you for writng such a great review!

Reviewer: _Lily_Ginny_Potter_
Date: 02/18/08 2:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wha!?...

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, dear, even if you seem confused ^_^

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 02/17/08 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oooh! Cliffie!

I love how you characterize Tonks, with all the parentheses. Your image of her is great! You seem to have a grasp on her. I love all the afterthoughts. XD

Keep on writing this!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much, Hanni! Your review made me smile. And yes, there's more of Tonks to come! :)

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