Reviews For Swaying Free
Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 04/06/08 8:33
Chapter: Swaying Free

Man, this just makes me feel so loved. You already know how much I love this poem, and how fantastic of a job you did, and I'm so happy it got on MNFF! *SQUISH* Thank you.

Author's Response: *huggles*

Reviewer: TCole
Date: 03/24/08 17:51
Chapter: Swaying Free

Hi Michelle! *Squish*

Alrighty. First off, I don't usually like poems and such, but for some reason.. I really enjoyed reading this. It was wonderfully written, and you really got your point across.

"I’m almost gone,
I know it’s true.
I don’t know why,
I’m still with you."

That stanza really stood out to me. It just really makes you see how close they are to dying, and how can I put this... It shows how.. confusing? Maybe that's the word I'm looking for. It shows how confusing death can be.. Even if it's not for the person who is losing someone, but how confusing it is for the person who is actually dying. Like.. I guess you could say that it shows how they feel like it's going extremely slow, but yet for the person that is losing someone it seems like it goes too fast? I think that's what I'm trying to say..

See this is why I don't normally like poems. I tend to confuse myself too much with them. Heh.

Well, love. I really did like this. :D Keep on writing.

Author's Response: Aww! *loves saying that* Thankies, Tiff! I hope I've turned you to a poetry geek... MWAHAHAHA! *coughs* --xoxo Michelle :)

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 03/24/08 17:15
Chapter: Swaying Free

aww.. so sad! I loved your choice of words, they really reach the heart. Great piece!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks!rnrnxoxo Michelle :)

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