Reviews For Blue Highway
Reviewer: lunaandneville
Date: 10/15/09 17:39
Chapter: Last Chance

Awwwww.... I LOVES this story!!!! It makes me sad but its so well written!!!!

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 10/07/09 19:33
Chapter: Last Chance

Ah, the bastard nature of the causality loop, with effect preceding cause. This was a remarkable tale, and I liked the use of present tense, which made it like traveling over James's shoulder in his journey.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/24/08 18:19
Chapter: Last Chance

I'm sure I've read part of this before, perhaps before it was all posted? I've just finished POA again, and I read this in hopes of a similar ending, that James would save Laura, like Sirius and Buckbeak were saved. I thought it awful that he went through all that and she died anyway, and it's even worse because he frightened her into falling. I know the message was that he knew he'd done wrong and she decided not to jump, but I still hate the ending.

Author's Response: Aw, don't hate the ending! Actually, the ending was supposed to signify two things - that James had to pay for what he'd done wrong and that you can't change what has already happened. I refuse to believe that a person can change history!! Anyway, if James had saved Laura he would have been in big trouble with the Ministry - who knows what they would have done. Changing histroy is very dangerous anyway. I'm sad you didn't like the ending - hope you liked the rest of the story in the end. I'm not very good at keeping endings happy - I like the darkness and angst of a shocking end. >_< Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 02/23/08 5:24
Chapter: Last Chance

this is so sad, im almost crying.

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! :)

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 02/17/08 17:28
Chapter: Arrival

Hmm... this is an intriguing start. Is "Lily" a shortening of "Laura"? I didn't get that at the beginning, because in his mind James calls her "Laura." I think he would have called her Lily instead. Well that was a tiny thing, but in general, this is good!

Author's Response: Hi! Well, this is James Potter II (Harry's son) grown-up. So Laura is his wife. :)

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum 6th-7th Years
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
A Seer Named Rosemary Snape by PlutoLovegood 1st-2nd Years
In 2018 Neville and Harry deliver a Hogwarts acceptance letter to Rosemary Snape...
Gelido Dormitabis (An Icy Slumber) by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
A poetic look at the oppressive sleep of the Inferi within the icy cave.Written...
A Christmas Choice by coolh5000 3rd-5th Years
After working late one Christmas Eve and missing yet another day out with his...
Winter at the Castle by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The winter solstice, the shortest, harshest days of the year. Would you have...
A Passing Fancy by HalfASlug 1st-2nd Years
The Yule Ball is on the horizon and Neville knows only one girl that he wants...
Four Christmases by Squibstress 6th-7th Years
Minerva attempts to teach Severus Occlumency and perhaps something more.