Oh this was just fantastic! You have such a grasp on the World.... the characters, the way magic works, the way -time- works... it all fits in so well to the world we know, but also adds that new layer of awesomeness. Everything I read of yours just makes me want to read more!
Author's Response: hehe thanks :) I remember you leaving a SPEW review on my first story on MNFF over two years ago and pointing out some OOCness. XD I'd just like to thank you again for that because if it wasn't for you and other people pointing out things like characterisation to me, it's likely that I probably wouldn't have looked too much closer to it. =) So yeah, even if it was a while ago, it was one of those reviews that actually did inspire me to improve. =D
this is the first gauntlet i have ever read and i have no complaints about it! well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm glad that you liked it--I was afraid that it would make no sense =P