Thanks for being the first review! I'd actually completely forgotten this story. I wrote it for the Gauntlet Challenge a couple years ago, which, if you don't know, is a challenge where you choose a character and are given ten prompts to write a full story with. But you don't get the second prompt until you've finished writing the first part, and so on, which is why the plot is so all over the place. It was a fun story to write though, and I'm glad at least one person other than my guide and beta read it! lol