Reviewer: terumi91
Date: 03/16/12 4:51
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

write another please! this was fantastic really, i wish there was another because now i have to search for one just as good as this. You have such an amazing talent for creating "page turners" it's wonderful.

Reviewer: -pippy-
Date: 12/05/10 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

I loved it. I can't wait for more. Draco's reaction? A little bit of Harry/Draco love? ;)

Well done. :)
-Pippy-

Reviewer: ilydraco
Date: 07/25/09 18:20
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

You should continue it , it was good

Reviewer: Evangeline Rose
Date: 07/25/09 16:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

very well written, i personally enjoyed it thus far =)

Reviewer: IchigoPudding
Date: 02/27/09 16:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

Continue soon =)

~IP~

Reviewer: quillbites323
Date: 01/17/09 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

Excellent work. I really like your rendition of what happened after the Last Battle. I feel that what you have written so far could have really happened (aside from the fact that Harry might have a slight love interest with Draco, but that's slash for you!). I can't wait for more from you! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Twiggy girl
Date: 01/04/09 2:58
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

Hi!
I love the story so far! Please do continue! It sounds great. I really wanna see what Malfoy's response would be! Keep up the good work!

~Twiggy-girl~~

Reviewer: Stone Lily
Date: 12/11/08 2:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

Very nice. I think that it opens up rather nicely for the rest of the plot.

Reviewer: noah937
Date: 08/06/08 12:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

very well done, im anxious as to when the following chapters will be posted.

Reviewer: Harpotfan
Date: 03/21/08 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

This is more what I would think Harry would feel. he would take the guilt on hisself for all of the deaths instead of placing the guilt on the death eaters who caused it. Please continue with the story

Reviewer: Loyd1957
Date: 02/18/08 9:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

Interesting beginning. Kind of wondering if this will be a dark verse light with Harry and Draco? Or will Draco work with the the people he often tormented.

Author's Response: As soon as I find a new beta I will start posting the rest of it. -_- My other one went MIA.

Reviewer: PotterGal_72
Date: 02/15/08 2:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

You should write a sequel to it. Its really good for your first story. I added it and you to my favourites. Well Done.

Author's Response: Oh this is a chaptered story.... I have 27 more chapters after this waiting to be sent in for approval. LOL And I'm also planning to write for the 4 years of Auror training has to go through as well.

Reviewer: iceboy814
Date: 02/14/08 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tying Up Loose Ends

First of all you dont need to include the full names of the characters,second is this your first stories

Author's Response: Yes is it my first story, and using all of their full names was entirely intentional. In JKR's style she always gives a slight overview of the past at the beginning of each book in case people haven't read the ones prior. Granted, most people will have, but it is just a precaution. ^_^

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