I'm a bit late to the HG/SS ship reading/writing/reviewing, but, as in most things, when I do something it's full-bore and I do it voraciously.
That said, I have now read most likely thousands of HG/SS ship stories; short and long, many good, some very bad and others amazing stand-outs. Yours is at the pinnacle of the later, I assure you.
First-person, from Harry's point of view, Done so well and with perfect attention to canon detail as far as possible in dealing with an AU of a HG/SS ship...
You have my congratulations, my thanks and my DEMAND for more, More, MORE! :)
Thank you - this is the very best HG/SS I've yet read.
Hello! Just here to say that I loved the fic.Seriously,I never thougt about that ship,then I dreamed about it. Congrats!
love the clowns picture there. that made my entire family laugh histerocaly. btw i cant spell my way out of a paper bag. lol
it is about time someone shows that harry and snape can have a truce.
nice ending
Lol..."Of course he could still use a shower."
The humor used in this piece was fantastic! I liked the use of first-person through Harry's point-of-view. Not many people can pull off an effective first-person story without using too many of the narrator's thoughts, but you found the perfect balance! This story is definitely being favorited. =)
o my gosh so cute! you made me smile,quite a feat.
o my gosh so cute! you made me smile,quite a feat.
I love this!! Its funny and sweet, and I can honestly imagine it all happening.
wow "he could still use a shower" lol wow I love it
I enjoyed this. I thought Harry's POV was well written. I liked the little touches of humor as well.
amazingly...cute. There aren't many of this pairing in Harry's perspective and even fewer that have him call a truce, so your idea was original and well-written. Points for keeping them as in-character as possible! 10/10 stars!
It was great!
But it NEEDS a lot more.
I want it to be 12 chapters of goodness not one!!
Author's Response: Thanks. ^_^rnNah, I really won't be adding more. I just don't really like writing Snape/Hermione. I only wrote this because I thought it would be a funny little one-shot (and once I got the idea in my head, it wouldn't leave).
This is great!! I went through a huge hermione/snape reading frenzy a while back and can tell you this is one of the best! I love how its from Harry's point of view, a very unique and great idea! You should consider adding anouther chapter. Your writing style is refreshing and your humor is brilliant!! I'll be on the look out for some more stories from you!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. :-) But I don't plan on expanding this one.
Amazing! Perfect! Feel honored, I logged in to comment ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks. :-)rnFeel honoured, I logged in to respond. ;-)
Ah! It's so sweet... I really enjoyed that. Plus, a SSHG from Harry's POV was very unique. I think you did a good job of getting Harry's personality right and I also think that the way Herminone acted affronted was clever. I don't really think she'd "make" Ron "beg" for forgiveneness, though... Anyway, that's my 2 cents.
Author's Response: Thank you! :-D I do tend to exaggerate things...
OMG!!!! That was so awesome!!! The characters were so really .....and the reactions......it was all great! :)
Great job and definitely goingin my favorites:)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks!
