Reviewer: kumo
Date: 03/02/05 7:45
Chapter: Prologue

I love this prologue, especially its setting. it gives an ominous atmosphere that i've never seen in other stories before! great!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I like the atmosphere in this one I don't think it can be light it has to be like this for the story to work

Reviewer: chica91
Date: 01/15/05 19:48
Chapter: Epilogue

Great ending! I loved it!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: chica91
Date: 01/13/05 18:48
Chapter: Two

Hey Kristina! This is a great story, sad but great! I never saw an idea like this, I love it! Porr Neville, and everyone. Did you finish or is there more?? :)

Author's Response: There is another chapter but I have to re-word it so that they'll post it. but if you can't wait this is posted on fanfic slightly different mind but it is there

Reviewer: Amilia Navarre
Date: 12/30/04 6:55
Chapter: Prologue

I really like it so far. I have always wanted to know what really happened to the Longbottems especcially since OotP. PLEZZZ keep writing. Oh and if you have the time R&R my story "The Dark Lord's Heir" Oh and I give you a 150 not a 10. They just dont have that rateing.

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, this is only a short story but I have another called Friends Forever, Maybe Not which I'll be posted soon which has Alice and Frank as main characters. Again thank you for the review

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