Reviews For The Moment
Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/05/08 15:23
Chapter: The Moment

aw that was great! That's really really good! You TOTALLY got the R/Hr kiss! YAY!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 07/02/08 19:50
Chapter: The Moment

Hello Luna! In my review to your story with Schmergo, I promised I would go and read your stuff, so here I am! And I read your bio. Being my normal Know-It-All-Lily-Hermione self, a normal tiger is a bengal tiger. Knowledge promotion done, on with the review:

lol perfect moment to do it in! I loved this part, after waiting 6 years and 625 pages (I've already memorized the page number, which is how much I love R/Hr), and you did a perfect poem about it. It took me a while to get it, but the Harry quote helped me understand. Great job! Ron/Hermione is one of my favorite pairings, but I have to say my OTP is Sirius/Lily. I'm delusional, so what? They make such a cute couple! Great poem!I'll read more of your stories tomorrow, but I have to get off the computer now. Great job, again! {BeccA}

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Did you say my story with Schmergo?! Excuse me as I run like a maniac to see if it's been accepted!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 02/28/08 1:16
Chapter: The Moment

Aww Luna, how sweet. The repetition was nice to and gave it a real feel. Though to be honest, I don't think Hermione would be thinking this when kissing Ron. *squish*=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I have to edit it when the queue opens up again.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 02/16/08 17:27
Chapter: The Moment

Aw, that was a very sweet poem...Hermione's POV in poem form! I especially liked:

Flying, soaring, lifted off her feet.
Never tasted anything quite so sweet.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love your username! That part was inspired by a book called 'Blackthorn Winter.' There's a line in there about how 'His kiss was sweeter than any cup of tea.'

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 02/16/08 17:13
Chapter: The Moment

Luna, how can you write such breathtakingly romantic, beautiful poems? This one, I think, is your best... even better than that acrostic you did for "TICK TICK SNAPE SNAPE SEVERUS SNAPE." I honestly felt my heart beat a little faster reading this.


Weirdly, I am listening to a song called "This Is The Moment" right now... but that's beside the point. The rhyme scheme is maybe a little off, but I didn't even notice it was supposed to rhyme until reading it a second time through. You have an absolutely amazing way of conveying emoition. My favourite part was "Flying, soaring, lifted off her feet/Never tasted anything quite so sweet."


I also like how free-flowing the lines are and the nice rhythmic quality, it keeps things fresh and keeps it from getting too rigid.


The ending sounds maybe a little... sexual, but that's just my filthy mind talking. Another fantastic job!

Author's Response: Thanks, Schmergo! Now that you've said it, I wonder how long it will take before I see the end in the same way. I guess the subtle rhyming is my trademark. The only reason it rhymes like that is because I'm too lazy to find words that rhyme exactly.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 02/16/08 16:45
Chapter: The Moment

aww... good poem! :-P

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 02/16/08 16:01
Chapter: The Moment

YES! Excellent! My friend Breanne constantly refers to this exact moment, page 625 (she has it memorized) in the American edition, when Ron and Hermione kiss, as her favorite moment in any book ever. I don't love that second to that level of devotion, but this is quite nice!

Author's Response: Thank you! I just think Jo handled Ron and Hermione's relationship so well!

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