Reviewer: Elan Lovett
Date: 02/25/08 19:24
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

It made me laugh. Good job! Never knew what Voldy's inner self was really like until now... :)

Author's Response: Thanks for R&Ring! Glad you liked the peak into Voldy's inner self. :-)

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 02/24/08 15:31
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Hahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whew, that was funny. It's going on my favorites, for sure. Who knew that Voldie was really in Brazil?

Author's Response: Thanks for adding it to your faves. :-) You're right, who knew that Voldy was in Brazil? lol

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 02/23/08 15:24
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH I adore this little note to Jo from my ovely Voldysmoldy! Poor Voldy he really needs a love life. Yet again so do I.. Well since ou brough it up Im gonna ready exceprts form Naginis Diary jsut cause Im becoming quite addicted to Voldy humour =)

Author's Response: I agree, Voldy needs a girlfriend, lol. Now that he's not trying to overthrow the world, maybe he'll have time. :-) Thanks for R&Ring!

Reviewer: pygmypuffgurl
Date: 02/22/08 21:39
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

LOLOLOLZ!!!!!! This is SO ridiculolusly hilarious.

"Please tell all those fanatic ‘shippers’ that Bella/Me never, ever happened, and if it did, I'd gouge out my eyes with a spork."

That part almost made me fall off the chair. This is the funniest story I've read in a while. Please excuse me now, I have to go read "Excerpts from Nagini's Diary."

Author's Response: Many thanks for reading this one, and I hope you enjoy Nagini's Diary. :-)

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 02/22/08 18:34
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Very funny, I very much enjoyed this little letter! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :-D

Reviewer: harry12393
Date: 02/22/08 18:12
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Awsome Idea to think about Lord Voldemort's perspective

Author's Response: Voldy's perspective is so often forgotten, that he needed his side of the story told. :-)

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 02/22/08 13:37
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

You know, I like Voldy in this one, lol. He seems perfectly normal to me. Hehe. It was very good fic. Loved the clarifications he made in the end! Oh, by the way, if you can in any way contact Voldy, tell him Draco is NOT gay. We're married! Lol. Sorry, I do love him very much.

Anyway, I loved your story! You should write more like this one.

-M. Malfoy

Author's Response: Don't worry, I'll be sure to pass on the word to Voldy about Draco. :-) Thanks for reading! Also, I may do something similar, though I'm not sure yet...

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 02/21/08 22:45
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Hahaha omg rofl!!! Great job:)

Author's Response: Thanks for R&Ring!

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 02/21/08 16:43
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Absolutely amazing! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: Siriusly Mr Black
Date: 02/21/08 15:14
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

wow! I am in love with this fic! It is such an original idea,and really cleverly written. I love the simpsons reference...and the spork!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Aww... Thanks! I'm really glad you loved this fic! :-)

Reviewer: Dara
Date: 02/21/08 8:24
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Ha, that was awesome! Pure farce, but awesome!

Author's Response: Definitely farce, but so well worth it to write it! lol

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 02/21/08 0:17
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Oh god that was brilliant! I loved it! Laughing the whole time! Voldemort on a beach naked...Gee I sure hope he used sunscreen...You know what they say about fair skinned people and too much sunlight, lol
It was a funny amusing and entertaining story, and I shall look up the others that you mentioned.
And Voldy was NUDE????
No wonder that lady screamed! She probably never saw anything like THAT in her life!!! rotflmao
Great story! thanks for putting a smile on my face...Even if it was at the expense of Voldemort...Creepy dude he is...

Author's Response: I know all about being fair skinned and burning easily! lol I'm really glad you liked the fic, and yeah, Voldy was nekkid. lol And I'm glad I was able to put a smile on your face! :-D

Reviewer: Grania
Date: 02/20/08 21:31
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Hahaha this was hilarious! Absolutely brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :-D

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 02/20/08 20:41
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

I liked it, it was very funny and well written. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks for R&Ring! xD

Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 02/20/08 18:44
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

I was laughing so hard when I read this :)
Especially about the "with it" and "par-tay". And the fruit basket, and disneyland(That one just made my day. Seriously)
Great job, this was amusing, and your writing flows very nicely. *hands out free gummy bears* (yes, gummie bears, I have an obsession with them. STOP STARING AT ME PEOPLE!!)

Author's Response: I'm glad the Disneyland reference made your day. :-) And I love gummie bears too! Wish I had some right now, lol!

Reviewer: HPLoverForever
Date: 02/20/08 18:25
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Very, very creative! I honestly would have never thought to come up with a story like this, it's very unique!

There are a few grammatical errors within here, most of which are quite minor. Always make sure that when you're going to have something in parenthesis that the period goes after all of it. There are some parts in here where you've got your parenthesis after the period, thus disconnecting it from the sentence.

Also, although this is meant to be a humorous story, keep in mind that Voldemort should still be at least somewhat in character. There are multiple cases throughout this where Voldemort is not in character in the slightest. For example:

Putting that little embarrassing incident behind us, Jo, I must say, the sun feels great on my pasty skin. Why, it wasn't until I got here that I realized just how freaking pale I truly was. Severus actually had more color than I, and that my intellectual creator, is truly saying something since he hardly ever saw sunlight. Now -- hey, what's this? Some college kids just invited me to party with them. Sweet! It's nice to know I'm still "with it," even if they did change what “it” was and what “it” is seems slightly weird and scary to me.

As I said, I understand that this is meant to be humorous, but in some cases I think it may have been taken a bit far.

Other than that, your story was very good. It was funny, creative, and all around a great fic. I really enjoyed reading it and you did a nice job. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up on the parenthesis. I fixed them, hopefully I got them all. :-) I'm really glad you liked the fic, despite the small errors. :-)

Reviewer: xXNymhadora_FanxX
Date: 02/20/08 18:01
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter


Author's Response: Me too. They're like my weakness, or something. :-)

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 02/20/08 17:20
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Hilarious! My brother read it over my shoulder, and he was laughing so hard, he had to sit down!

I just love number four! Especially the spork! Pure genius!


Author's Response: I'm thrilled you and your brother both liked it! :-D Thanks to both of you for reading it!

Reviewer: Falconlord5
Date: 02/20/08 16:47
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Your sick. Hilarious, but sick.

Author's Response: I just march to the beat of my own drummer, lol.

Reviewer: seedist_zala_nacho
Date: 02/20/08 15:20
Chapter: The Dark Lord's Letter

Hahahahaha! This is so brilliant! I love it!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :-D And thanks for R&Ring!

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