i htink you should write more to this story!
Please, please, PLEASE... write another chapter! I want to find out what happens!!
it's nice...are you in-love?becoz u seem to explain it like you had felt it...anyway...good job
man you should write more chapters to this story....it's awesome..I love it... its soo nice and cute.... please....please write more... please ?
That was great! Please don't make it a one-shot!
I'm with padfootprongs. YOU...CANNOT...MAKE THIS...A ONE-SHOT...FIC! Mugglenet should have a law: good writing needs at least 6 chapters.
I...DEMAND...YOU...TO...NOT...ABANDON...THIS...FIC!!! I'll have this on my favorites waiting for more! ; )
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! why did you make it end? it was so good...they should have gone fat=rther...YOU SHOULD HAVE MADE THEM GO FURTHER!!!...o well. cant be helped. its not my story anyway.
i really really really like this one and although i dont usually read romances i thought this one was good.
tht was fantastic write more asap
Author's Response: Well, I would write more, but this was a short, two point of view story. I was just testing my writing out to see if anyone liked it. But, there's two more fics coming that I'm getting ready submit to mugglenet.
That was soooo good! You really capture the essence of the characters! Please write more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I write to please. This was a really short, two point of view story. I'm writing another one right now, though. Actually two. One is a Harry/Hermione, the other James/Lily. Check em out when they're up? Thanks again.