interesting, a meddling dumbledore... i like it!
love it and dumbledores latin!!
I thought this was awesome. I agree, all the characters were exactly right.
Luv the story so far! As for the next teacher i think you should do Slughorn, i mean everybody loves Slughorn, it could turn out really cool.
KEEP GOING! JEEZ THIS IS A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!
AWWWW!!!! So totally cute and lovely and funny!!!!
I love the word defenestrate and am so glad you used it in the story! Can't wait to read more!
I love that these are from teachers' points of view. I also like that they are matchmakers; that's a really funny idea I hadn't thought of. One of my favorite moments was when the portraits were discussing James and Lily. Update soon!
Ohhh. This is interesting. ;)
But, here's one error I noticed:
"As for James Potter… perhaps Albus was write."
lol i always knew there had to be a reason behind his quirky personality and now i know it! you have one amazing imagination!
haha who woud have thought it? lily pushing james out a winow. lol
I like it, it just seems kind of weird that Professor Dumbledore, Professor McGonagall, and the portraits are playing matchmaker. I like how you call him 'Albus' though!
Smiles,
Luna
I love the idea! I love the idea that you have going here!
Just one thing though, Alice's last name wouldn't be Longbottom yet becasue she isn't married. Keep up the good work!
I love it! GAFHBW - that made me laugh out loud. Very well written, everyone seems very in character, and I love the way it's unfolded so far. *clicks add to favorites button* Wonderful job, keep writing!
~fawkeshermione
Yay! first let me say I love that Lily pushed him out of a window. Second, I love that the teachers are all meddling!
Hmmmm... the next teacher to meddle...Well I immediately thought slughorn, don't forget that Lily Evans did belong to the slug club...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Haha1 I loved this! I think you portrayed Dumbledore very well, and I liked the humor that was laced throughout. I think it would be a brilliant idea to continue through their seventh year. All in all, i say this was very well written and a nice break from the normal cliched romances. 10/10
Haha1 I loved this! I think you portrayed Dumbledore very well, and I liked the humor that was laced throughout. I think it would be a brilliant idea to continue through their seventh year. All in all, i say this was very well written and a nice break from the normal cliched romances. 10/10
i love it this is sandalous in a good way i hope you continue all the way through i will love to read it when it comes around!
i have to say, "defenstration" is one of my favorite words of all time. I learned it last year in my history class and have loved it ever sense. Gracias for an excellent use of the word.