This looks really good! I think you kept Mad-Eye very in character, but without making him too paranoid and crazy. Poor man shut up all alone in the house. I wonder how Elizabeth's going to take it when she finds out He's read her letters? ( She will eventually won't she?) Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to show a little broader picture of the same person, and I'm really glad you feel I kept him in character while doing that. Elizabeth...is a very smart girl. That's all I'll say for now on that! The next chapter should be in the Queue by tomorrows, so you haven't got terribly long to wait. Thank you so much for the review! ProfPosky
Ah, that's so sweet! Moody story #2 - I think you have a third (though that's assuming I can count, not one of my strong points.) Again, I will have to put this on faves. Please do update soon, I need to read! Oh, and I quite agree that the guy in the films doesn't look much like Moody (but I still like the guy in the films, though I much, much prefer the book character.) ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know you like it! The next two chapters are Beta'd and awaiting my final polish, so the wait should not be too terribly long! Thank you for reading two of my stories in one day, and reviewing both!!!! ProfPosky
I really like the beginning of this story. I love the way you write Moody, and Elizabeth seems very interesting. I can't wait to read more... :) Cyns
Author's Response: Oh, I am so glad you like it! Moddy is just one of my faves. To me he looks nothing like the fellow in the movie,and, well, you'll see, I have all sorts of things coming up in the ensuing chapters! Thanks for reading and reviewing! This really made my day! ProfPosky