Reviews For HEAVEN
Reviewer: LilyLuna13
Date: 08/04/11 8:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw . . . great job!
Love this pairing

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/18/08 23:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

aaww!!! thats soo sweet!! i loved it!! but tonks was in hufflepuff, not ravenclaw.

Author's Response: thanks

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: LupinforTonks
Date: 06/10/08 14:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brilliant story.
M only new to mugglenet and this is the first one I added as my favourite story

Author's Response: that is sooo sweet. Thank you soo much. I appreciate all commits. I'd like for you to know that u just made my day.

Reviewer: icthrestals
Date: 05/18/08 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

it was good but for a mjor hp freak like myself and other its quite annoying that you say tonks was in ravenclaw whaen she actually was in hufflepuff, but good other than that. Alsio she would have killed lupin if he called her nyphadora.

Author's Response: I appreciate all commits. thank u

Author's Response: I appreciate all commits. thank u

Reviewer: Come_What_May
Date: 04/01/08 19:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is one of my favrite storys i love how sweet this is

Author's Response: thanks sooo much. u r sooo sweet.

Author's Response: thanks sooo much. u r sooo sweet.

Author's Response: thanks sooo much. u r sooo sweet.

Reviewer: TheHarryPotterGirl
Date: 03/06/08 20:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this is really good, I can't believe it's your first one. I want to see more like this. :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I love all these compliments everyone is giving me.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love all these compliments everyone is giving me.

Reviewer: Kiley
Date: 02/11/08 0:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is tremendously appealing. I've gotten so used to the tragic nature of Remus and Tonks' relationship that it's comforting to read something that is just sweet and loving. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks. This fic. took place in Order of the Phoenix, so its just when they started liking each other so its got to be a little cute and sweet and fluffy. Its just got to. Thanks for reviewing. Dora.

Author's Response: Thanks. This fic. took place in Order of the Phoenix, so its just when they started liking each other so its got to be a little cute and sweet and fluffy. Its just got to. Thanks for reviewing. Dora.

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 01/30/08 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really sweet! Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks. I never expected this many revews on my first fic

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 01/30/08 20:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

That is beautiful! I only wish he had the courage to tell her to her face: she is his heaven. Anywho, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing.. You're the best.

Reviewer: kehribar
Date: 01/30/08 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is very sweet :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I try my best to stay adorably cute.

Reviewer: Dora_Lupin
Date: 01/30/08 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

aww! it's so cute! I love the idea that he can smell her, and having her smell like Heaven was brilliant! (though how he knows what Heaven smells like is beyond me...)

In the book series by Stephenie Meyer Edward can smell Bella... that's what this reminded me of.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, and that series was exacty were I got the idea from.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 01/30/08 18:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good for a first fic. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, and trust me, I gonna keep writing. It's so much fun.

Reviewer: hermy1123
Date: 01/30/08 17:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved the Pirates of the Caribbean reference!!! Cute fic, light and fluffy, just like it should be.

Author's Response: Thanks, it means so much to me that you replied.

Reviewer: ritaskeetertobe
Date: 01/30/08 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwww... it's so sweet! I love it!
Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was trying to make it short but sweet.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/30/08 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

not bad for a first fic! but pleeeease check your spelling, in both the story and your summary. and just from a purely personal viewpoint, i think this story has an unbearably cheesy last line. I think fics with lupin need a much more serious tone, even the ones where he is hopelessly in love. or whatever. but overall, not bad.

Author's Response: Thanks for telling me all my mistakes, I'll remember them when writing my next fic. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Marauder4Life
Date: 01/30/08 15:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was cute! You should write more!

Author's Response: Thanks. That means a lot to me. I will write more.

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 01/30/08 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was really cute!!! I like the idea of it!

"I do have to admit it was an exceptionally quiet entrance-- especially for you"< that was hilarious!

You just made one canon error- Tonks was a Hufflepuff!!! But it was still really good!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing my fic. and thanks for telling me my error

Author's Response: I also loved the joke. Once I got what you'd said, I started laughing really hard

Author's Response: I also loved the joke. Once I got what you'd said, I started laughing really hard

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 01/30/08 15:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

oooohhhhh.... :)))) very NICE. no, really, i liked it! and it just started out from those little friendship things - you know, a little question of how this and how that, and then... well, it's very realistic, and i like it a lot, and you should make some more up :D that's what i say B-D ahem, miss vanity overtook me again!
but you really should make some more stories like that.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love how your commit is so nice, your the best.

Reviewer: wolverine_rox
Date: 01/30/08 13:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

loved it! I wished you didnt end it .
I wanted to hear more.

Author's Response: Sorry I ended it. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 01/30/08 13:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my! this is really sweet! you did a great job on your story!

I hope you do more!

(note: Nymphadora was in Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: Thank you for loving the story... and I promise I will right more if I can.

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