Reviews For Colour the Sky
Reviewer: The Half Blood Prince
Date: 08/23/08 5:16
Chapter: Colour the Sky

You don't know Noldo, by any chance? This reads like her and many of her friends writing.

Either way, this is quite good and deserves more comments. I'm glad you posted it. :)

Author's Response: I don't know Noldo personally, although I HAVE read her excellent writing. I'm glad you liked this piece: personally, I'm not too fond of it, though...for some reason I find it a little lame. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 02/22/08 16:47
Chapter: Colour the Sky

Wow; very touching. The POV here is interesting, and this flowed very nicely. I was so sad by the end of it, half in a sad way, but half in a good way. Hannah grew up, and she came to terms with life, which was a sweet ending.

Also, the way the "blue sky" theme was carried over through out the entire story was great. Really good job, it was enjoyable to read.

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