Reviews For I'll Never Let Go
Reviewer: hanname
Date: 04/26/13 5:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Like it :)
I think it's perfect that they fight and then tell each other how they feel.

Reviewer: Solar knight
Date: 08/19/11 0:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

It was pretty nice. Though I think a bit of details about the time of the memory, and about the fight would be better. And I dont think Ron's mom ever yelled at Harry.

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 07/12/11 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwww loved it

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 09/27/10 7:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

soo sweet! ron always doubts himself! great job, thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Raeinflight
Date: 03/13/10 2:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

hey there, did you give up on your chaptered fic?

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/11/09 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh i loved it! so sweet, but not too fluffy. i hate when its all fluff and not even close to the characters' real personalities. you did a wonderful job of NOT doing that, i am in love!!!

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 05/14/09 4:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww that was so cute! I actually really liked it. You kept there very in-character and I enjoyed listening Ron's thoughts.Great job :)

Reviewer: DarkStar12626
Date: 03/07/09 2:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well done! It was quite well written for a first-timer. My stories used to suck when I was first starting out. And one-shots are especially hard to work on, since you have to introduce all the ideas and characters in one single chapter. But you really did well! Good job! But you should try and make your transition into flashbacks smoother, and that's the only thing I could see even remotely wrong with it. :) Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: potterchick525
Date: 12/04/08 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW AMAZING i love it

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 09/09/08 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, well I meant it. Anyway, thank you for the heads up, I'll be looking for it.

Reviewer: hermiones_rose
Date: 09/08/08 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

aaaww!
fantastically fluffy!

But you stole the title of my in-the-making fanfic, so im upset :P

come check it out sometime please :)

Author's Response: oh thanks so much!! And sorry about the title haha. I'll definitely check out your story though. Drop me an email with the summary and stuff like that and I'll be sure to look out for it!!! email= lucialotempio1001@gmail.com

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/30/08 9:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really? Well you are most certainly welcome. Keep the fanfics coming.

Author's Response: haha yeah whenever any reader says something incredibly nice to the author it alwaslys puts a smile on their face. Oh and I'm trying to get my chaptered angsty h/g accept but its been proven hard without a computer =P. Either way look out for it!

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/08/08 19:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was good. Your first, wow, I'm impressed. I liked it.

Author's Response: Wow thanks!! That really means the world to me!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 07/26/08 0:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

i really liked the ending.... it is definitely the Hermione thing to say :o)

Author's Response: Oh I'm glad that you thought my characteraztion is up to par. I do appriciate the review. It means a whole lot to an author when the reader takes the time to review his or her story.

Reviewer: Lovee_Potterrr
Date: 06/27/08 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwe. that was very fluffy-in a good way.
:)
very nice job.

Author's Response: Oh thanks so much for the review! I was definitely going for good fluff =]. Thank you again for not only taking the time to read my story, but taking the time to review it. It means a lot!!

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 05/15/08 18:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was wonderful! So sweet and perfect. That is exactly how I always pictured their relationship. The pain, the arguments, the apologies, the touch of humor.... you captured Ron and Hermione perfectly.

Keep writing! You have a definite flare for getting inside character's heads and making them crystal-clear to the reader.

~Fauna

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! You definitely made me smile after a very long day :]rn-Lucia

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/12/08 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooooo! Sweet and fluffy! I loved it! 100000/10, and it's hard to tell that this isn't your first fic. Great job & 10000000000000/10. {Riley/Becca}

Author's Response: Oh thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot! And by the by I *love* The Beatles too! (and no I'm not a 'Across the Universe' bandwagon fan, I promise;])

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 04/22/08 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked it. It's nice to hear from Ron's pov every now and again. Plus, it was soooo sweet! You did a really good job.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And just a little fun fact, I just reviewed your story like two seconds ago *cue creepy music*

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 04/12/08 13:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! this was really good writing. I loved the flashback. Your characters were very well written. It was nice to look inside Ron's head like that. The title was perfect. Great job!
~HermyRox12

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliments they make me really happy!!! I'm so happy you liked it!!

Reviewer: mlpony22
Date: 04/07/08 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwwww.......what a happy muffin shortie.

-may the muffins be with you.

Author's Response:

Thank you? I'm gong to guess that muffins mean fluff? Hmmm... I will ponder this for some time.... Anywho thanks for taking the time to review!!

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