Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 02/04/09 3:24
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

LOL every time another chapter comes out. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Sorry I've been away so long. I took a break for a few months due to personal crises, but I haven't stopped working on my stories. Keep your eyes peeled for another chapter soon!

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 01/24/09 17:58
Chapter: Pants and Romance

“That wasn’t a tackle, really. It was, erm, an overanxious embrace!”

Standing ovation to that!!

I adore this humour fic. It's positively and absolutely hilarious, without arriving to riddiculous situations, impossible situations. I like the way you just manage to keep it believable.

Ron n Herms were particularly perfect in this chapter! Cheers to a wonderful work!!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 01/19/09 1:40
Chapter: Pants and Romance

awesome!!!!!!!!! i love the peas and ron's antics

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/18/09 18:37
Chapter: Pants and Romance

Hahaha, Ron certainly knows how to make an impression! A very interesting read :-)

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 01/16/09 17:12
Chapter: Pants and Romance

this is SOOOO good, i cant wait for more:)

Reviewer: The-heir-of-Gryffindor
Date: 01/16/09 5:49
Chapter: Pants and Romance

Haha another good chapter
although i dont think Ron is very realistic.
just my oppinion sorry,
this was a funny bit
She’s far too clever, and coordinated and such… and a magnificent dancer!”
lol
xx

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 01/15/09 21:09
Chapter: Pants and Romance

OK besides the pairings which have appeared, this chapter was good.

I LOVED this part, “Would you care for a sip, Frankie?” Luna said softly, seemingly to the left pocket of her robes. She tilted the glass a little so that whatever was in her pocket could have a better look. No one dared to comment."
So Luna.

I hope you go back to doing the Truth and Dare aspect, though it seems like you are. Are you planning on making this into a shipper story, or just keeping it funny because I can only handle so much Heron, and even less H/G.

Please don't think this is a flame. I LOVE this story. I'm just a H/Hr shipper first.

Your writing, as always, is awesome!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 01/15/09 2:50
Chapter: Pants and Romance

hi
overall i thought that this chapter was good but i was really disappointed that there was no truth or dare in it. i liked how ron asked hermione on a date and how he told her that he had started knitting!!! i also think that it was quite short. mabey if u added alittle more truth and dare it would become longer!! lol. oh and i LOVED how luna asked that girl if she wanted some of her juice. that was soo funny.
anyway it was good but definatly not my fav chapter. hope that the next update isn't too far away.

Reviewer: acciomagic
Date: 01/14/09 19:38
Chapter: Pants and Romance

This is just a really fun story! Thanks for your writings.

Reviewer: Lucky_13_Girl
Date: 01/14/09 18:56
Chapter: Pants and Romance

This is so wonderful! Well worth the wait! But I can't wait for more dares and truths!

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl163
Date: 01/14/09 6:53
Chapter: Pants and Romance

finally a new chapter it took so long! but it was great loved it! it was really great can't wait for the next one, please hurry with it!

Author's Response: My mistake! I updated it weeks ago, but it got turned down because I left some mistakes in there (I really need a new set of eyes!) So I had to resubmit it, and the wait was agonizing! I was so happy when I got the e-mail this morning that said it was approved. I'm glad to hear that you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 01/11/09 0:32
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

I love love LOVE your story!!!  it's sirus-ly one of my all-time favorite!! (and I've been around a while too)

Author's Response: That's a weighty compliment! Thank you so much! I have several other stories up on the site as well, I'd love to hear what you think of them!

Reviewer: SchnazzyMango
Date: 01/09/09 22:44
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

Hahaha, good ending to this chapter. I can't wait for chapter 13! I love it, Crabbe: "Oh, I've got it. I pick 'Truth!" xD

Author's Response: You all come up with the silliest screennames; I love it! I just got an e-mail that the new chapter is posted, so have a look, and thanks for leaving me a note!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 01/09/09 2:09
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

hi
do u think that there will be an update anytime soon? i think that this has been the longest wait between updates since u re-posted the story. plz don't keep us wait ing too much more!!!

Author's Response: I'd updated it weeks ago, but it was turned down because of some silly technical mistakes I made. Oh, I need an extra set of eyes. Luckily, I JUST got an e-mail saying the new chapter, "Pants and Romance", has been posted. Have a look!

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 01/04/09 10:36
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

MAN! i wish this many people review my stories...ROCK ON! this is really wonderful, as i know you have heard many times before. i think i liked the first chapter the best, i just love how the game is moving throughout the school!

Author's Response: I'll take a moment to read one of your stories! Replying to everyone can be daunting, but it's absolutely worth every single note!

Reviewer: Romantic-Reader
Date: 12/18/08 21:19
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

Fantastic!!!
Writing Genious, Such Comedy,
I Loved Every Word, Sentance, Paragraph and Chapter!!!
Sheer Genious
Can't Wait For More

Author's Response: Thanks for such kind words! I just updated the next chapter, so hopefully the mods will have it up soon!

Reviewer: Lyra Lestrange
Date: 12/13/08 10:01
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

Short but funny! I can't wait to see what Ron does. I hope Hermione forgives him! I also want to say that I like how you characterized Crabbe and Goyle. Only they wouldn't know whether to choose truth or dare!

Author's Response: I love your author name combination! Happy news: I updated the new chapter just a few hours ago! I hope you all enjoy it. You'll definitely have your answer about Hermione forgiving Ron, but Ron makes it very difficult for her! Thanks for the note about Crabbe and Goyle - I usually avoid writing them because they're hard to write, but I'm giving them some scenes in the next chapter....!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 12/06/08 20:30
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

i love it how you always respond back to me! i think it's so nice how you take the time and effort. but ive been waiting a long time for the next chapter, any idea when its going to be out?

Author's Response: Dun dun dunnnn! I just updated the new chapter a few hours ago. It awaits in the queue as we speak! (Er... type!) Hopefully the mods will have it out to you all soon. Thanks for the sweet note! I love writing everyone back, because the friends I've made here, and the connections, are so wonderful. I feel like I'm with friends here! Thanks for being so supportive!

Reviewer: LoonyLoopyLuna
Date: 12/04/08 16:07
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

This story was updated almost a month ago and I can't wait for another chapter to come out! The way its going makes it look as if this fanfic could go on for quite a while. I hope it does. I haven't laughed so much in a long, long time. Of course, Harry Potter can do things to me that no one else can.

Author's Response: Good news for you: I just updated the next chapter a few hours ago! Sorry for the long wait, I really hope you'll find it worth it. I love hearing that my story has made some of you laugh, so thank you so much for writing and telling me. Everytime I get a note like this, I get a little blushy!

Reviewer: Lady Lloyd
Date: 11/25/08 7:44
Chapter: Bits and Pieces

lolz amazing, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait to get the next chapter up!

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