Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 05/28/08 18:13
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

oooooook fine. end with a cliffhanger. i'd get mad if i could stop smiling. =)

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I can't help it... I confess, I'm addicted to cliffhangers! The suspense is delicious, and it lets me hope that you'll all come back for the next chapter!

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 05/28/08 16:02
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

Nice. I LOVE Frankie the worm, He's so cool!!!! lol Oooo lets see what Malfoy does....can't wait until you update:D

Author's Response: Thanks for the note! The next chapter should be up within days, because I already have it written and the mods have been very busy bees!

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/28/08 15:56
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

Oh God! What's he gonna do? Please get the next chapter up soon so I don't die waiting! By the way, approximately how long do you think this story is going to be? Just so I know how much longer I'll be checking the computer every five seconds to see if it's been updated.

Author's Response: The next chapter will go straight into Draco's plotting, I think. It should be up within 3 days or so, because the Mods have been working as fast as lightening lately!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 05/28/08 14:59
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

This was a particularly enjoyable chapter; one of my favorites so far.

Ah, typical Hermione. Rather do homework... but Mrytle's bathroom seemed more important to her in second year, eh?


I have a bit of crit *gasp*... even if it is Myrtle, I don't think she'd describe someone as 'pallid' and 'hook-nosed'. Maybe just one of the two. It doesn't make the chapter bad or anything; I just noticed it.

The soap-and-water fight was so cute. I was grinning the whole time I read it.

“He looks dreadfully thin, haven’t you cared for him at all?”

I love that line! You have Luna perfect- odd but so entertaining. I also like, "He’s drooling over me right now!”

But the worst part... the cliffie! I want to know what Draco's up to... and if it'll work!
~PnP

Author's Response: I really appreciate you taking the time to give feedback and criticism! It helps me write better stories! I do agree with you about Myrtle's line, and I keep forgetting to go back and change it. Thanks for pointing that out! Keep reading, and thanks for the watchful eye and kind words!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 05/28/08 14:51
Chapter: Worms and Wars

Whoops, I forgot to review this one! Brilliant as always, dear... I wonder what Malfoy is thinknig up for revenge!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a note! I love getting them!!

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl163
Date: 05/28/08 13:54
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

another great chapter,
can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: The mods have been working quick as lightening!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 05/28/08 12:58
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

oh, I love the way Luna demanded her wand and the worm back from Snape, that was so funny. I'm curious to see what Draco is going to do to them, but I hope it isn't too bad.

Author's Response: The Slytherins are known for doing their worst, but the Gryffindors can handle anything thrown their way! Thanks for the note, I love hearing about the parts you liked because it helps me write better stories!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/28/08 12:08
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

Oh no! I didn't realise there was another chapter up and now I'm left with a huge gliffie! What will Malfoy do? Will the others be prepared? I loved the cleaning of Myrtle's bathroom, it was excellent! That's the sort of thing i'd expect of kids at a boarding school, great fun! I'm glad Frankie was alright, hope Luna keeps him in her dorm from now on or Snape might have his way. Can't wait to see what Malfoy does, hope they turn the tables on him and humiliate him even more, i can't help thinking he deserves it. Oh, and great slogan, No ones hotter than Harry Potter, love it.

Author's Response: Thanks again for another detailed and thought-out review! I really look forward to this kind of feedback! I had a lot of fun with that chapter. I hope the next one doesn't disappoint. You'll get to see pretty quickly what Malfoy and co. are up to.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/28/08 11:52
Chapter: Worms and Wars

Yet another excellent chapter. I love the idea that they got Malfoy, I mean he's always doing impressions of Harry falling off his broom, having his nose stamped on etc so nice to see him get some of his own medicine. I'm a huge Luna fan, only she could behave like that in Snapes class. I mean he's stumped as to how to punish her because she doesn't seem phased by anything. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I love reading your reviews because it helps me wrestle with what's working and what isn't! Thanks for the kind and detailed review!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/28/08 11:10
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

oh yes i wanted to add that at the bathroom part i was laughing soooo hard and i had my hand over my mouth so i did not look like a total idiot but it sounded like i was choking and my mom was like "are you okay? are you alive?" it was funny

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Thanks, I *love* hearing that I've made someone laugh!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/28/08 11:07
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

eeeeeeeeeeeeeep do what do what do wwwwhhhhhhaaaaaatttttt *lola is sitting on the edge of her seat in anticapation* OMG iloved the sene in the bathroom that was the best ssssssooooooooooo hilarious

your fathful reader
ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Sorry about the brutal cliffhanger... but I love writing them! Thanks for the sweet and encouraging note!

Reviewer: Lucky_13_Girl
Date: 05/28/08 7:47
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

I love this story! Every time it's updated, I get an E-mail. It's awesome!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for adding me to your favorites, and double-thanks for leaving a note for me! I read and respond to every single one!

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 05/28/08 3:19
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

What comes next?

Author's Response: Draco and co. are now officially involved in this little prank war, and are planning some very Slytherin revenge.

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 05/28/08 3:15
Chapter: Soaps and Suds

Can't wait to find out what Malfoy's up to! Great job with this. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! The next chapter should be up soon, especially with how fast the mods have been working!

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 05/27/08 16:39
Chapter: Worms and Wars

i can't express how much i'm laughing. these 2 chapters made my day. thanks as always!

Author's Response: And hearing that I made you laugh and cheer up is what makes *my* day!

Reviewer: MandyBlack
Date: 05/27/08 16:24
Chapter: Worms and Wars

Hi! I love your story! it's so funny! haha :D keep writing!! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks! The new chapter is already up, thanks to the Mods! Add me to your favorites if you want to be notified when chapters are updated!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 05/27/08 16:10
Chapter: Worms and Wars

omg, dropping the worm down Draco's robe was a funny dare and I like where this prank war idea is headed. update soon.

Author's Response: The new chapter is up! The mods are working so fast my head is spinning!

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl163
Date: 05/26/08 18:59
Chapter: Worms and Wars

i love this chapter by far one of my favorites, i can't wait for the next one i am like addicted to it now
i'v been trying to put this story on my favorites but it's not working do you know whats wroung?

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! I'm not sure why it's not working when you try to add the story to your favourites, but I think there's a button at the end of each chapter that says "Add to favourites". If that doesn't work, just click on my Penname and I think you can add me that way! The best part is that you'll get notices when I update chapters or introduce new stories!

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/26/08 15:01
Chapter: Worms and Wars

It was Malfoy! I knew it! Truth or dare turned prank war, I absolutely love it! What will happen next? And does Luna ever get Frankie back?

Author's Response: Luna and Frankie are as inseperable as Hermione and "Hogwarts: A History"! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 05/26/08 12:04
Chapter: Worms and Wars

lol! malfoy and the worm was so funny! and i love how luna imatated snape!

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so!!

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