Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 08/01/08 23:33
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

What happens next? What happens next??!!!

Author's Response: Hermione will be livid with Ron of course, but only at first, because he's got ways of turning her frown into a smile. Snape is in for a drastic cosmetic change!

Date: 08/01/08 22:45
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

I salute you, Hutchinson! I have not seen a funnier story in a long time! Neville and the hives in inconvenient places was hilarious (GO NEVILLE!!), the fad was great, Luna is fantastic and perfectly in character, and I. Love. This. Fic. Update soon, this is great!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you picked up on that line, because it's my personal favourite. And I love when Neville gets the opportunity to show his Gryffindor bravery. Thanks also for the feedback about Luna being in-character, it's something I've been working on. Keeping them in line! Woosh!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 08/01/08 21:56
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

yay you finally updated. this chapter is great. I wonder what will happen to snape!

Author's Response: I'm sorry it took so long! And by the way, Snape's reaction to Luna's surprising spell is going to be pretty huge...;)

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/01/08 19:33
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

lol!! that title had my wondering... but that was so funny!! i bet hermione's gonna be mad at ron, though....

Author's Response: I can imagine the thoughts running through your head... "Bums? Who's bums? How much bum? Where, and why?" LOL. Hermione always loses her temper at Ron, but I'm sure he'll find a way to make her smile again. ;)

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 08/01/08 17:52
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

omg what a cliffie!!!

Author's Response: It's my not-so-secret way of luring you all back for more! Muahahaha! ;)

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 08/01/08 16:18
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums


I am such a fan of ur work!!!

Its amazing!!!

I love what u did to Hermione!!!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Have you seen any of my other stories yet?

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 08/01/08 15:38
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

You've surpassed yourself this time you really have. This was I-can't-breathe-I'm-laughing-so-hard hilarious! And not only that, all the characters were perfectly in character and thats such a hard thing to do. I love all your original characters to, particularly Hilda. I think my favourite line was from Malfoy - “I look like a sodding Weasley!”, although it was extremely difficult to pick only one. Please keep the chapters coming, they're like e-cheering-charms.

Author's Response: I really appreciate such a kind review! Sometimes my characters ge a little out of line, so I'm happy to hear you found them in-character this time. I'm whipping them into shape! I'm so happy to hear I've made you laugh, and the thing about "e-cheering charms" may be the best compliment I've heard. Thanks for reading, I'll keep writing!

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 08/01/08 14:59
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Luna is my hero!

Author's Response: I love it! She has a braveness and calm that can't be described!

Reviewer: x2o
Date: 08/01/08 11:10
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

This is terrific, Luna is one crazy person :P

Author's Response: Let's just say... unique! ;)

Reviewer: TheHarryPotterGirl
Date: 08/01/08 5:32
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

HA! loved it.  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Check out some of my other stories in the meantime, if you like!

Reviewer: Troll_In_The_Dungeon
Date: 07/31/08 23:07
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

I love this series. Please, write many more chapters. I do not think this will ever get old, and you are a great author. I cracked up!

Author's Response: I have a lot of fun writing this story, and there are many chapters to go. I'll keep writing if you all keep reading! (This is why I currently have 5 stories going!)

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 07/31/08 22:39
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Haha wow! That was so funny! Hermione is SO going to kill him! I wonder what happened to Draco...? Is Luna cleaning Snapes hair? Haha that was great! :D

Author's Response: Draco needs to have more patience and humility, because he's red AND sick! As for Luna, she's definitely done *something* to Snape's hair/head region. I'm happy to hear you liked it!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/31/08 20:55
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

ooooh she she she CLEANED HIM
and what will hermione do to ron
(find out in the next episode of "Luna's Truth Or Dare") haha get it like a soap opra hahahahahahahahahahahaha
ooh musht find out what happens next


Author's Response: You're exactly right! And as for what Hermione will do to Ron... she's good at making him sorry! But he'll win her over again. ;)

Reviewer: Lucky_13_Girl
Date: 07/31/08 20:42
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

This is so funny! Please update soon!


Author's Response: You got it!

Reviewer: Lyra Lestrange
Date: 07/31/08 19:37
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Aw, poor Hermione! I felt terrible for her! But Ron's idea was pretty funny. I also like the bumblebee earrings--very Luna! I was scrolling down and then the chapter ended just like that, so I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: I'll try to have the next chapter up as soon as possible. Right now, I'm waiting for the next issue of "To Draco, With Love" to be approved. Sorry about the cliffie!

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl163
Date: 07/31/08 19:13
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

okay so thats the second best chapter yet i have to agree with fiffer haliwell the one where ginny kisses amy then harry was the best. maybe it becasue i am a h/g fan but it was so funny. anyway love it like always and can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't sure how such a scandalous scene would go over!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/31/08 19:06
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

hahaha i love this chapter it is one of my favorites competing with the one where ginny kisses amy and harry. It's great!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was worried I might be pushing it too far with that one! ;)

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 07/31/08 18:39
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!! Ha ha hilarious!

Author's Response: I love knowing I made anyone laugh! Check out my other humour story "To Draco, With Love" if you get a chance!

Reviewer: xohplovr94xo
Date: 07/31/08 18:38
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

haha that was really funny!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/31/08 18:26
Chapter: Serenades and Kisses

wow I'm so happy i re-found this story it's great it took me forever to find it agian but now that i have it's going to favorites I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for adding me to your favourites, and for coming back to see me! I was hoping at least some of you would remember me!

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