Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 09/04/08 18:53
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

When you read my fic on, can you leave a review. If you do leave a review please start out with something like " Hi, this is Hutchinson from Mugglenet".

Huggles From HermyStar

Author's Response: I had some trouble finding your story there! Do you go by a different penname?

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 09/04/08 15:56
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

I wrote an HP fanfic and put it on It's called Another Version Of The Harry and OC Love Story.

Huggles From HermyStar

Author's Response: I had some trouble finding your story there! Do you go by a different penname?

Reviewer: Rome
Date: 09/04/08 5:39
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Haha, absolutely lovin the story so far! =D
Any idea on when the next update will be?

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait! I'm trying to respond to reviews right now, and then I'm posting the next chapter. Woosh! Here I go!

Reviewer: anitnut
Date: 09/03/08 17:48
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

This is one of the funniest stories I've read in a long time. All the character's are hilarious but I Luna's antics are my favorite. LMAO. I can't wait for your next chapter. Hopefully, Snape won't kill Luna! LOL.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 08/30/08 15:29
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

Are you done writing the next chapter? If you're not, I understand. I could never handle writing all those stories at once.

Author's Response: I'm definitely done writing the next chapter, but I'm a little held-back by that rule about only having one Humour story in the queue at a time. "To Draco With Love" has been delayed, so I can't update Luna's until Draco goes through. Sigh. Sorry for the delay!

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 08/30/08 15:26
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

YAY!!!!!YAY!!!!!YAY!!!!!! You made the top tens!!!! You're so awesome!!!! I'd also like some advice. I'm hoping that in three years, when I'm thirteen, to finally write a story on here. I have a couple of fanfic ideas floating inside my head. I was wondering that when I finally do write a story, if you would recommend starting out with a one-shot instead of a full length story. What do you think?

Huggles from HermyStar

Author's Response: I can't believe you're not thirteen yet, because you have better grammar and spelling than some 30-year-olds I know! ;) Here's my advice to you: start out with one of your story ideas that you love, one that you imagined because it's a story you'd love to read. A one-shot would be easier because you could get feedback about it as a whole. Then you could start a longer chapter-story (you could even use the one-shot as inspiration, or make a continuance!) and let reviewers continue to help you grow as a writer with their feedback. I hope any of that made sense! Let me know what you think, and I can't wait to read your stories someday.

Reviewer: bookfairy05
Date: 08/28/08 15:44
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

I love this story!!! Have you ever thought of putting it up on

Author's Response: I don't think I've ever been to that site! Maybe I'll post it there once I've finished the story here. Thanks for the tip, and the kind note!

Reviewer: stardazzle786
Date: 08/27/08 8:16
Chapter: Candy and Garlic

lol...omg i totally love this story...its sooo funny, its reminds me of my school xxx

Author's Response: Sounds like some interesting school days! ;)

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess96
Date: 08/25/08 18:52
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

hey, did you know that this is on the top ten reads list? thats SOOO cool!!!! :.)

Author's Response: I didn't know that! Wait, I may have. I knew one of my stories was on one of the Top Tens somewhere, so I appreciate the tip! As soon as I read your note, I went to go see for myself. I was so thrilled! A lot of talented authors on there, and I appreciate being listed among them. Thanks again for dropping a note!

Reviewer: not-so-saint
Date: 08/24/08 11:45
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Oh come on! it's so evil to leave on such a cliff...
plz update soon!

p.s. great job! ;)

Author's Response: Much to my chagrin, we can only update one Humour story at a time, and I have 2 in here! So I take turns... Luna's Truth or Dare, then To Draco With Love, then Luna's again. Sorry for the long wait!

Author's Response: Much to my chagrin, we can only update one Humour story at a time, and I have 2 in here! So I take turns... Luna's Truth or Dare, then To Draco With Love, then Luna's again. Sorry for the long wait!

Reviewer: not-so-saint
Date: 08/24/08 10:38
Chapter: Worms and Wars

roflmao :D
it was just so... hilarious! you ARE really really good!

Author's Response: I appreciate the kind words! Check out my other stories if you get a chance!

Reviewer: not-so-saint
Date: 08/24/08 8:41
Chapter: Candy and Garlic

"He had an accident,” she said with perfect nonchalance. “Didn’t you, Malfoy?”

Draco nodded between sobs, too terrified to say otherwise.

just BRILLIANT!!! i couldn't stop loughting... almost fell off my chair

Author's Response: I'm glad I got a laugh out of you, and thanks for telling me the bits you like.. it helps me write a better story!

Reviewer: pad-foot
Date: 08/22/08 21:11
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums


Author's Response: Thanks, you got it!

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 08/21/08 22:02
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

I just found out something that proves that my theory about The Unseemly Proposal is wrong. I took a look at when the one on hasen't been updated since summer of last year!!!!sparx has vanished!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *breaks down and cries*

Sad and Tear-filled Huggles From HermyStar

Author's Response: Sigh. I feared as much....

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/20/08 17:52
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Hahahaha! Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 08/16/08 5:24
Chapter: Green and Crimson

this whole story is fantastic bravo!!

Author's Response: Too kind!

Reviewer: hpfanatic112794
Date: 08/15/08 17:52
Chapter: Let the Game Begin

this is the best humor story i have ever read!!! very original idea. but can u please go back to the actual truth and dare at the common room? other than that great job and i hope you keep up the good work!!! when r u going to update?

Author's Response: Several other people have asked about bringing the game back to its roots in the common-room, and you're absolutely right. I'll be bringing them back soon, but the involvement of the rest of the school will continue to play out as well. Thanks for the suggestion, and I promise to update soon! Right now I'm updating on two of my other stories... woosh!

Reviewer: HPluver95
Date: 08/14/08 20:31
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

This is a really funny story i laughed the whole time. Can't wait for the next chapter hope it is soon!

Author's Response: I love hearing when I've made someone laugh! Check back soon, and peek at my other stories in the meantime if you like!

Reviewer: ILRW4
Date: 08/14/08 9:38
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Please add the next chapter soon! This one was absolutely hilarious, and I can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next chapter will be dancing into the queue soon, but in the meantime, feel free to check out my other stories! I have another Humour fic called "To Draco, With Love". Have a look!

Reviewer: Adreniline
Date: 08/13/08 23:51
Chapter: Clever Tricks and Cute Bums

Moreee! That was an epic ending.

Author's Response: Coming soon! Sorry for the wait; I've been toiling on my other Humour fic "To Draco, With Love".

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