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Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 04/21/08 18:22 · For: Hit
After thoroughly reading the HP series, I don't think Harry was out of character. He does have quite a temper made worse by being confined. I agree with your thoughts on why Snape seemed to regret his actions and would also like to add that as Snape wasn't at Hogwarts, was in his own castle albeit rundown, he acted as his nature would have him act when not put under Dumbledore's restrictive gaze. I know they were both given instructions by Dumbledore but he's not physically there is he? I can't wait for more, I wonder if they'll avoid one another or come to some sort of truce? Oh, and will Harry want Spinners end on his conglomerate stone? Or will he use the stone to get away from there and in so doing place himself in more trouble? I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Author's Response: I'm glad you approve of the chapter. That's what I like to hear. And you're getting "warm" with the last couple of questions, but you'll see what really happens. Thanks!! ~Sara

Name: Janus (Signed) · Date: 04/19/08 12:09 · For: Caged Inside
Your Potter series are superb but the uploading is soooo slooow :-(

Author's Response: Well, the chapter was rejected and it took me a few days to finally go over it once again, but I re-submitted it on Saturday. Hopefully, it'll be up within two weeks. rnThank you!!!

Name: magyk001 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 14:49 · For: Caged Inside
Good Chapter. This different road series is really amazing.Kepp up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! ~Sara

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 04/04/08 11:55 · For: Caged Inside
What a brilliant chapter! And it seems Snape is on his best behaviour, so far. Is Harry quite dense or do I just understand the clues from the old newspaper because i know his story? Also, why would Black know that Harry and Ron or Harry and Draco are friends? And I'm rotten at working out riddles so I haven't a clue what'll happen next, so I'm even more eagerly awaiting your next installment. Excellent stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you!! Let's just say Dumbledore spoke to Snape about treating Harry well, or as well as he can, I suppose. You just know all the clues, so its no surprise for you. You're probably refering to when Harry asked why he couldn't stay at Malfoy Manor and Dumbledore said that Black might go there (if I'm wrong do tell me). Well, everyone thinks Black is evil, and obviously Dumbledore knows or suspects that Malfoy Sr. is a Death Eater, so they might be in contact. I'm glad you're excited for the next chapter! Thanks again! ~Sara

Name: snpdrgn (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 10:56 · For: Caged Inside
Great chapter, but too short! : ) My guess is that 448 stands for GIT as it greasy-haired-git! We'll see!

Author's Response: So true: Snape is a greasy git!! Thank you!! The chapters will get longer soon, I promise!! ~Sara

Name: lostinside1 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 10:03 · For: Caged Inside
hehe the slimy git. love snape he is amazing!

Author's Response: thanks!

Name: lostinside1 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 10:03 · For: Caged Inside
hehe the slimy git. love snape he is amazing!

Author's Response: thanks!

Name: lostinside1 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 10:02 · For: Caged Inside
hehe the slimy git. love snape he is amazing!

Author's Response: thanks!!

Name: lostinside1 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 10:02 · For: Caged Inside
hehe the slimy git. love snape he is amazing!

Author's Response: lol!

Name: lostinside1 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 10:02 · For: Caged Inside
hehe the slimy git. love snape he is amazing!

Author's Response: don't we all?!

Name: RNCybergate (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 5:25 · For: Caged Inside

Well...if I think about it then it can't really be any worse with Snape than it would be with the Dursleys...I mean..whats different...both don't like him...both only tolerate him because 'the big fool who worships the greater good' wants it so.

At least Snape doesn't beat him around the place...though if the numbers 448 mean anything (either GIT, HIT or HIV?...Snape wouldn't sexualy assault him...would he?)... 

Either way...nothing good. 

Darn...Dumby and Snape need their smailes removed...badly...



Author's Response: Well, I figured that living with the Dursley's would be somewhat better since he's so used to it and since he's allowed to leave the house to walk around or whatever, even if they do hate him. But at Spinners End, he's with a man who hates more than just him, he hates his father, and he can't leave the house to get away from Snape.

No, Snape won't be sexually assaulting Harry. Most of the time, Snape doesn't want to be anywhere near Harry, so I can't imagine him being with Harry sexually. Oh, is Dumbledore smiling too much? I guess I just wanted him to attempt to brighten the circumstances, but of course nothing could for poor Harry.

Thanks! ~Sara

Name: the_wind (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 5:20 · For: Caged Inside

This is annoying - whenever I try to read a chapter of this fic while logged in, my Internet crashes. Means I have to log out, read the fic, log in again and review.


Oh well, it's worth it to read this story! Good chapter, as usual. Hmm.. what can 448 means? Reading some other reviews, I suppose it could mean "hit" or something similar, but I get the feeling it may be more trivial than that...

Author's Response: Sorry about your computer! That really sucks!

Why, thank you!!

I wanted the number to be longer, but house numbers generally don't have more than three-digits. Or at least not where I live. Thanks for the review! ~Sara

Name: Irith (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 20:58 · For: Caged Inside
hmmm.... i lookied on the phone keypad, and a couple of things can be spelled by 448... like 'git' 'hit' and (though i certainly hope this isn't what happens ) "HIV".
Judging by those options, it is something else that the numbers stand for. Probably.
In any case... Snape seems to be a bit warmer towards harry than i would have expected. Maybe it's just because he's a Slytherin...but whatever.
I wait anxiously for the next update!

Author's Response: Well, it's not HIV. I'll have to be more careful about how Snape treats Harry from now on. I knew this chapter seemed a bit muchy between the characters, especially when they were eating, but I was hoping it would seem more uncomfortable and awkward.

Update to come soon!! ~Sara

Name: Supershrimp (Signed) · Date: 03/30/08 19:12 · For: To Whom It Concerns
I'm actually reviewing for the next chapter.. "Caged Inside"..

Does Snape hit Harry? Or Possibly Vise Versa?

I got the word "Hit" because on Phones the only english word the numbers 448 spell out is hit.

Great story. I'd love it if you updated soon, but I understand that it may not be your fault :).

Author's Response: Well, you'll see what happens! I already submitted the next chapter to the queue, so hopefully it'll be up soon!rn~Sara

Name: the_wind (Signed) · Date: 03/27/08 4:53 · For: Brooded Over Plans

For some reason I got the idea that it was Snape - therew asn't really any other choice if it was to be the last person Harry would want to live with.


Update soon!

Author's Response: True, true!!

Name: Irith (Signed) · Date: 03/26/08 21:03 · For: To Whom It Concerns
WOW... didn't know what i was expected, but it sure as heck wasn't Snape's house...wow... i liked the brief mention of Lockhart... i can't wait for the next chapter! Snape/Harry dynamics should be interesting...

Author's Response: I LOVE twists!! I must say, it's so much fun! I love reading your (readers) reactions!!

I kind of felt bad about leaving Lockhart out since so many people seemed slightly upset by it last story, so I thought I would mention him. ~Sara

Name: Faethe (Signed) · Date: 03/26/08 15:07 · For: To Whom It Concerns
Oh my god! What a great twist! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it! ~Sara

Name: RNCybergate (Signed) · Date: 03/26/08 13:47 · For: To Whom It Concerns


Hi...this is the same review I left in Fan fiction.net...but I feel it's only fair to leave it here too.

Well done. 


[Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here]

THAT just about summons it all up perfectly!

My last shred of respect towards that stupid Dumb old fool who calls him self Dumbledork has just disappeared.

Harry...whatever you do...never ever listen to the old F* again if you can afford it...your a Slytherin...make good use of your skills.

I might be able to understand keeping Harry away from the Malfoys but bringing him to Snape...of all people, is simply INEXCUSABLE...in short...THIS MEANS WAR...no matter how good his intentions are.

HE KNOWS that Harry hates Snape...HE DEFINITELY KNOWS that Snape doesn't like if not hate Harry...how can he do that?

Maybe the Malfoys can tame Snape slightly...but I just don't know...the hates too deep.

I'm so ** off about this...all 'Dumb-Like-A-Dork' has ever done for Harry was make his life miserable...THAT must STOP.

Harry use your portkeys to portkey to Malfoy manner or somewhere...just get out of there.



Anyway...enough of that...

Great chapter...the fact that I'm so emotional about it tells you everything...

Well done.

At least Harry will know Sirius is no threat when he realizes that it was the dog he spoke to...after all it would have been easy to kill Harry at any time had he wanted to do so in the last chapter...
(and the fact that Sirius was even trying to defend Harry from old Lucy means something too)

So at least there is hope there...if the cards are played right Sirius's name might even be cleared at the end of this story (book3...as in your book 3)...and Harry can live with him.

Hm... I wonder if Harry could convince Lucius to convince the minister...

The Blacks and Malfoys should stick together...with Harry on their side the Malfoys have a chance to gain a much better reputation than if they were with Voldy...

Who knows they might even be able to take down the DOD (Dumb -Old -Dork) too...he needs an ego check as it is...at the very least a kick up you know where. (I'm sure Fudge would agree)

Ah ...what a wonderful vision...Harry, Hermione, Draco and perhaps Ginny together minus Ron... (The Power Four)(I always thought Ron was more discriminating than the Slytherins when it came against the Dark arts vrs the Light...He's just as bad if you ask me, just for the other side.) He would only stand in the way of world peace.

The three mightiest houses combined...Malfoy, Black and Potter...together against the house of Riddle...

If everything goes right maybe the dark arts won't have such a bad name either...what a wonderful dream...

THAT should help a lot to unite all of Wizarding kind (the light and Dark living together in peace)..only Dumby And Volty in the way...

I can dream I guess...

Well...I'll be watching and waiting...

Again...well done.


Author's Response: Such a very long review!! If only I had the response to this, I would post it, but alas FF.NET doesn't allow people to view the author's response.

Dumbledore had good intentions for bringing Harry to Snape's. Let's hope it doesn't end too badly between the two (although I already know what will happen. hehe!). Yep, Harry will find out Sirius isn't bad, but not 'til the end, sadly. And it is no way possible that the Blacks and Malfoy's will stick together. They hate each other too much -- they're too different. Like I said before, I like the idea of the Dark Arts not having such a bad name. We'll see...


Name: Janus (Signed) · Date: 03/24/08 7:32 · For: Brooded Over Plans
But you didn't put a warning = no one will die........and by the way....this story is fantastic....only the chapters are uploaded too slowly.....

Author's Response: Ah, you caught me! So he won't be dying. That's good, right?

Well, the next chapter is already in the queue; the rest is in the hands of the mods.

Thank you so much!! ~Sara

Name: Janus (Signed) · Date: 03/21/08 12:03 · For: Brooded Over Plans
Oh I forgot.......there is 3rd possibility.......he would die

Author's Response: Hmm...too true. He could.

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