Reviews For Dreamland
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/22/08 17:03
Chapter: Chiromancy

Oh this is so brilliant, and yet it makes me so sad. it's awful that they have to worry about picking sides. How about they make a pact to stay best friends and not get involved in their parents problems? They are almost of age after all, so it's not like they can be forced into anything. And even if Draco Malfoy is involved in these muggle attacks, which i'm not sure he is fter Rose's excellent point about his traumatic time as a death eater, then all Scorpious has to do is say he doesn't want to be involved, he can take a stand, show the strength that Draco never did. And in the first chapter i really liked your characterisation of Albus, he seems so well meaning and appears to have inherited his father's tendency to protect. Great job and can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You have some excellent ideas in there! However, the story wouldn't be quite so interesting if things worked just like that, huh? Hehe. Sorry. =) Thanks! I really like writing Albus. I like him a bit more than Harry, actually, so he's easier to write! =) I think he's a bit deeper, too. Again, I thank you for such a lovely review! It means a lot to me!

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig112
Date: 06/14/08 20:16
Chapter: Chiromancy

Oooh, I'd really like to see how things turn out! Great job, and do update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! If I could get the next chapter approved, I'd be glad to update!

Reviewer: Pinguin
Date: 01/28/08 14:28
Chapter: My Wish

I love your style! I am curious how it will go on!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! The next chapter is awaiting validation! :)

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 01/25/08 12:05
Chapter: My Wish

not bad :D can see some nice cooking up going on - the element of suspense!!

Author's Response: Yay for suspense! Whoot! Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 01/24/08 18:20
Chapter: My Wish

good story! update soon!

Author's Response: Of course! I'll submit the next chapter today!

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