Great job! You captured Hermione's angst very well! I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews for this!
I love this verse:
I can’t think of you without seeing her
Holding you close with a grin on her face
Then I shut my eyes and look away
And cry a tear or two of disgrace
Wonderful, dear. ; )
Author's Response: Aww thanks; it's my first time doing it and I hoped I didn't blow it (hehe). My day is now happy :)