Reviews For Away From Her
Reviewer: dancingcarrot21
Date: 02/05/08 2:48
Chapter: Away From Her

Great job! You captured Hermione's angst very well! I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews for this!

I love this verse:

I canít think of you without seeing her
Holding you close with a grin on her face
Then I shut my eyes and look away
And cry a tear or two of disgrace

Wonderful, dear. ; )

Author's Response: Aww thanks; it's my first time doing it and I hoped I didn't blow it (hehe). My day is now happy :)

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