That sounds like how I'd feel. I love my family but I like to make new friends too. I can't imagine that on top of learning your true identity!
Author's Response: Wait until you see what comes next...
ooh when is the next chapter?
I love this!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is currently in the editing process, but I'll submit it the second it's finished!
I love this so far!
Author's Response: I hope that you keep on loving it!
Great story, but why does her name have to be changed????? Unless Reg (how I love Reg!) is her father, and had to leave her there before he went to destroy Voldemort's locket (so brave *sniff* why must the good die young? *in my mind, Reg was good*)... I am so confused with this story... KEEP GOING! lol. {BeccA}
Author's Response: Hopefully most of your questions will be answered in the following chapters. Thanks for the nice review!
Ah... her idol is a bit obvoius but still funny.
Author's Response: Yeah, she is just a obsessed girl. XD
OK, that makes sense. It sure worked though!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad to have cleared things up for you!
It's great!!! Why does it say Scarlet Lestrange instead of Scarlet Black like in the prologue and title? Sorry, but the name situation is a little confusing.
Author's Response: Sorry that it is so confusing. I wrote that so the reader feels as confused as Scarlet is. It is all part of the great mystery.
Curious . . .
The opening line grabbed me. If I haven't heard the entire story yet, why not? Very intriguing, and very clever of you to start with that. Though I may suggest you change "Prologue" to "My Story" or something like that. Just a suggestion.
Smiles,
Luna
Author's Response: Thank you for the suggestion! I must say, the first chapter or two is a bit like the book. But, after that Scarlet branches off from Harry's story. So the first chapter or two (the sorting, the train) is a bit like the book, but after that it hardly follows it.
cool story
Author's Response: Thank you!
Sorry about chapter 1, Luna! If you want, I'll beta it for you so you don't have to worry about dialogue or whatever. I took the PI test and it was just like editing some of your stories...so, yeah. Since this wasn't really a review, I'll add this: Your prologue rocks!
Author's Response: It's fine. I was kinda hoping that it didn't get accepted right away because I need to add a few bits to it to make it flow.
aha! So Regulus is her Dad!
Love it! Keep updating!
Author's Response: But wait, I haven't guarranted anything yet! *Does somewhat evil laugh*
wow this is great, cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! The next part should be up as soon as they start looking at stuff again.
So cool! How do you come up with this?
Author's Response: I was sitting on the couch with my friend this summer and was thinking about a book I had read called "Hitler's Daughter". It was a book based upon a theory that Hitler had a daughter. I thought to myself, "Hey, what if one of the Black brothers (and I won't say which one) had a daughter?
So cool! How do you come up with this?
Author's Response: I was reading a book one day called "Hitler's Daughter" that talked about the theory that Adolf Hitler had a daughter. I started thinking about who could possibly have a daughter, and the idea for this story came into my head.
I'm hooked! sirius left her there before he went after peter right? so was she at hogwarts at the same time as harry?
Author's Response: Who said that she is Sirius is her father?
Author's Response: Whoops sorry! I made a mistake on that one. I meant to say, "Who said that Sirius is her father?"
Awesome, Luna! *hugs Luna* Congrats on getting it accepted! Although, I think your formatting went a bit loco en la computadora (that means computer in case you've forgotten) and you might want to have be take a very mighty HTML fix to it with Mr. Happiness. Just a suggestion. You rock!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so excited!
