Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 08/12/08 19:44
Chapter: Sorting

That sounds like how I'd feel. I love my family but I like to make new friends too. I can't imagine that on top of learning your true identity!

Author's Response: Wait until you see what comes next...

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 08/06/08 12:10
Chapter: Sorting

ooh when is the next chapter?
I love this!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is currently in the editing process, but I'll submit it the second it's finished!

Reviewer: Lyratearsx
Date: 07/10/08 4:09
Chapter: All Aboard!

I love this so far!

Author's Response: I hope that you keep on loving it!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 06/21/08 12:15
Chapter: All Aboard!

Great story, but why does her name have to be changed????? Unless Reg (how I love Reg!) is her father, and had to leave her there before he went to destroy Voldemort's locket (so brave *sniff* why must the good die young? *in my mind, Reg was good*)... I am so confused with this story... KEEP GOING! lol. {BeccA}

Author's Response: Hopefully most of your questions will be answered in the following chapters. Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: JasperEvans
Date: 05/06/08 11:52
Chapter: All Aboard!

Ah... her idol is a bit obvoius but still funny.

Author's Response: Yeah, she is just a obsessed girl. XD

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 04/08/08 18:51
Chapter: Prologue

OK, that makes sense. It sure worked though!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad to have cleared things up for you!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 04/07/08 9:57
Chapter: All Aboard!

It's great!!! Why does it say Scarlet Lestrange instead of Scarlet Black like in the prologue and title? Sorry, but the name situation is a little confusing.

Author's Response: Sorry that it is so confusing. I wrote that so the reader feels as confused as Scarlet is. It is all part of the great mystery.

Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 04/03/08 17:06
Chapter: Prologue

Curious . . .
The opening line grabbed me. If I haven't heard the entire story yet, why not? Very intriguing, and very clever of you to start with that. Though I may suggest you change "Prologue" to "My Story" or something like that. Just a suggestion.


Author's Response: Thank you for the suggestion! I must say, the first chapter or two is a bit like the book. But, after that Scarlet branches off from Harry's story. So the first chapter or two (the sorting, the train) is a bit like the book, but after that it hardly follows it.

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 04/01/08 7:21
Chapter: All Aboard!

cool story

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 02/24/08 16:59
Chapter: Prologue

Sorry about chapter 1, Luna! If you want, I'll beta it for you so you don't have to worry about dialogue or whatever. I took the PI test and it was just like editing some of your, yeah. Since this wasn't really a review, I'll add this: Your prologue rocks!

Author's Response: It's fine. I was kinda hoping that it didn't get accepted right away because I need to add a few bits to it to make it flow.

Reviewer: mahogany_wand
Date: 02/20/08 18:44
Chapter: Prologue

aha! So Regulus is her Dad!
Love it! Keep updating!

Author's Response: But wait, I haven't guarranted anything yet! *Does somewhat evil laugh*

Reviewer: bellatrix1983
Date: 02/13/08 13:14
Chapter: Prologue

wow this is great, cant wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks! The next part should be up as soon as they start looking at stuff again.

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 18:26
Chapter: Prologue

So cool! How do you come up with this?

Author's Response: I was sitting on the couch with my friend this summer and was thinking about a book I had read called "Hitler's Daughter". It was a book based upon a theory that Hitler had a daughter. I thought to myself, "Hey, what if one of the Black brothers (and I won't say which one) had a daughter?

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 18:26
Chapter: Prologue

So cool! How do you come up with this?

Author's Response: I was reading a book one day called "Hitler's Daughter" that talked about the theory that Adolf Hitler had a daughter. I started thinking about who could possibly have a daughter, and the idea for this story came into my head.

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 02/01/08 23:01
Chapter: Prologue

I'm hooked! sirius left her there before he went after peter right? so was she at hogwarts at the same time as harry?

Author's Response: Who said that she is Sirius is her father?

Author's Response: Whoops sorry! I made a mistake on that one. I meant to say, "Who said that Sirius is her father?"

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 02/01/08 18:42
Chapter: Prologue

Awesome, Luna! *hugs Luna* Congrats on getting it accepted! Although, I think your formatting went a bit loco en la computadora (that means computer in case you've forgotten) and you might want to have be take a very mighty HTML fix to it with Mr. Happiness. Just a suggestion. You rock!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so excited!

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