Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/09/12 23:06
Chapter: Prologue

This is what I want to know too!(:

That was such a great prologue, you have my interest peaked!(:

I can't wait to read the other thirty chapters!(:

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 15:50
Chapter: Submission

OK Enough for me. A story is a story but condoning physical abuse in any world stinks. Bye

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 14:01
Chapter: Playing With Fire

Another mystery. Why was Fred so upset. I'm trying to think.... Sirius died 5th year. What else. What else? Moving on. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 13:30
Chapter: Published

Well. That's news. Now I'm dying to find out who is the mom and what the heck was going on.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 13:15
Chapter: Family Heirlooms

AH. Rita Skeeter in the house.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 13:03
Chapter: Dungeons and Dragons

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 12:54
Chapter: Something Wicked

RE: last line. Suddenly because her name is Black she thinks she's all that. I haven't seen anything that's she's done that would lead her to believe “Then you will see what I am truly capable of.”
I'm not liking this character so much anymore.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 12:47
Chapter: Saved By the Aspidistra

I love Sirius Black. I kinda wish Scarlet had been allowed to meet him.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 12:33
Chapter: Fear

Questions, questions, questions. I'm just wondering why this girl would even think that SB, with all his problems would come looking for her. Nice ego Scarlet.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 12:23
Chapter: Loopy for Lupin

Excellent. The plot thickens. So Lupin will be addressing Tonks. Nicely played. LOL. What has little Scarlet gotten herself into?

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 12:14
Chapter: Consequences

IMHO, sometimes you short your chapters when you could have fleshed them out with more detail. I do like your storyline though.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 12:08
Chapter: Curiosity Killed the Ego

A little jumbled but still interesting.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:58
Chapter: One By One

Finally, everything has fallen into place for me. LOL. I'm just way slow. Awesome, awesome awesome.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:49
Chapter: Unappreciated Genius

Right up until the end of the chapter I expected Fred and George to be pulling a trick on Scarlett and to be pretending that they didn't know how to work the Marauders Map. Your take on this is much better. Seems like there is quite a friendship blossoming amond Fred, George and Scarlett. YAY.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:42
Chapter: I Solemnly Swear That I Am Up to No Good


Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:35
Chapter: Frustration Among Other Things

AHA....My question has been answered. Lovely curve.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:30
Chapter: Christmas Surprises

Either I'm enjoying mysef immensely or the chapters are very short.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:26
Chapter: Potter and Potions

I like the interaction between "midget" and the twins. It is just like she was written in by JKR. Good work.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:20
Chapter: Sorting

Great chapter. I'm not following Scarlett's lineage yet but I guess I'm slow. I'm glad that I'm reading your story now (3/21/11) instead of when it was being written. This way I don't have to wait for the next chapter to go up, I can read everything all at once.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/21/11 11:10
Chapter: All Aboard!

Well written. Interesting storyline. Can't waait to read more.

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