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Name: crbluvsravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 07/09/12 23:06 · For: Prologue
This is what I want to know too!(:

That was such a great prologue, you have my interest peaked!(:

I can't wait to read the other thirty chapters!(:

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 15:50 · For: Submission
OK Enough for me. A story is a story but condoning physical abuse in any world stinks. Bye

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 14:01 · For: Playing With Fire
Another mystery. Why was Fred so upset. I'm trying to think.... Sirius died 5th year. What else. What else? Moving on. Great chapter.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 13:30 · For: Published
Well. That's news. Now I'm dying to find out who is the mom and what the heck was going on.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 13:15 · For: Family Heirlooms
AH. Rita Skeeter in the house.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 13:03 · For: Dungeons and Dragons
Good chapter.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 12:54 · For: Something Wicked
RE: last line. Suddenly because her name is Black she thinks she's all that. I haven't seen anything that's she's done that would lead her to believe “Then you will see what I am truly capable of.”
I'm not liking this character so much anymore.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 12:47 · For: Saved By the Aspidistra
I love Sirius Black. I kinda wish Scarlet had been allowed to meet him.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 12:33 · For: Fear
Questions, questions, questions. I'm just wondering why this girl would even think that SB, with all his problems would come looking for her. Nice ego Scarlet.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 12:23 · For: Loopy for Lupin
Excellent. The plot thickens. So Lupin will be addressing Tonks. Nicely played. LOL. What has little Scarlet gotten herself into?

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 12:14 · For: Consequences
IMHO, sometimes you short your chapters when you could have fleshed them out with more detail. I do like your storyline though.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 12:08 · For: Curiosity Killed the Ego
A little jumbled but still interesting.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:58 · For: One By One
Finally, everything has fallen into place for me. LOL. I'm just way slow. Awesome, awesome awesome.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:49 · For: Unappreciated Genius
Right up until the end of the chapter I expected Fred and George to be pulling a trick on Scarlett and to be pretending that they didn't know how to work the Marauders Map. Your take on this is much better. Seems like there is quite a friendship blossoming amond Fred, George and Scarlett. YAY.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:42 · For: I Solemnly Swear That I Am Up to No Good

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:35 · For: Frustration Among Other Things
AHA....My question has been answered. Lovely curve.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:30 · For: Christmas Surprises
Either I'm enjoying mysef immensely or the chapters are very short.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:26 · For: Potter and Potions
I like the interaction between "midget" and the twins. It is just like she was written in by JKR. Good work.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:20 · For: Sorting
Great chapter. I'm not following Scarlett's lineage yet but I guess I'm slow. I'm glad that I'm reading your story now (3/21/11) instead of when it was being written. This way I don't have to wait for the next chapter to go up, I can read everything all at once.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/21/11 11:10 · For: All Aboard!
Well written. Interesting storyline. Can't waait to read more.

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