This is what I want to know too!(:
That was such a great prologue, you have my interest peaked!(:
I can't wait to read the other thirty chapters!(:
OK Enough for me. A story is a story but condoning physical abuse in any world stinks. Bye
Another mystery. Why was Fred so upset. I'm trying to think.... Sirius died 5th year. What else. What else? Moving on. Great chapter.
Well. That's news. Now I'm dying to find out who is the mom and what the heck was going on.
AH. Rita Skeeter in the house.
RE: last line. Suddenly because her name is Black she thinks she's all that. I haven't seen anything that's she's done that would lead her to believe “Then you will see what I am truly capable of.”
I'm not liking this character so much anymore.
I love Sirius Black. I kinda wish Scarlet had been allowed to meet him.
Questions, questions, questions. I'm just wondering why this girl would even think that SB, with all his problems would come looking for her. Nice ego Scarlet.
Excellent. The plot thickens. So Lupin will be addressing Tonks. Nicely played. LOL. What has little Scarlet gotten herself into?
IMHO, sometimes you short your chapters when you could have fleshed them out with more detail. I do like your storyline though.
A little jumbled but still interesting.
Finally, everything has fallen into place for me. LOL. I'm just way slow. Awesome, awesome awesome.
Right up until the end of the chapter I expected Fred and George to be pulling a trick on Scarlett and to be pretending that they didn't know how to work the Marauders Map. Your take on this is much better. Seems like there is quite a friendship blossoming amond Fred, George and Scarlett. YAY.
AHA....My question has been answered. Lovely curve.
Either I'm enjoying mysef immensely or the chapters are very short.
I like the interaction between "midget" and the twins. It is just like she was written in by JKR. Good work.
Great chapter. I'm not following Scarlett's lineage yet but I guess I'm slow. I'm glad that I'm reading your story now (3/21/11) instead of when it was being written. This way I don't have to wait for the next chapter to go up, I can read everything all at once.
Well written. Interesting storyline. Can't waait to read more.