Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/03/10 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 16 The Wand of MacArt

Wow! Just spent my evening reading this story, love it! I'm not going to review every single chapter, I hope you don't mind just this one.

I love how Scorpius is taking the lead in the forest, though. I mean before it was Albus leading with Scorpius and Rose fighting, then Rose leading with her knowing everything, and now Scorpius! Very nicely done :).

I don't know who it is!! Ahh!! I just hope it's not someone like Luna who I love. I have a couple of ideas, but won't post them for spoiler purposes.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well, two chapters left, and I hope you will review them!

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 01/03/10 5:01
Chapter: Chapter 16 The Wand of MacArt

Ooh, I have a theory (which I shall keep to myself for spoiler purposes)!

Yet again, your portrayal of the hesitant relationship amongst the members of the Arcane ScoRA is fantastic, especially the sparks between Rose and Scorpius (which lends itself well to the future of one of my personal favorite ships). Poor Albus, first being dragged around by the hood of his robe and then being kicked in the shin...Rose is a wicked girl, lol

Wow, a manticore. It wasn't a giant, it wasn't some middle of the road beast, such as they had faced before, no. It had to be a freaking manticore, which is completely awesome.

Excellent chapter, and I look forward to its conclusion and hopefully the fulfillment of my theory. Take care and happy writing, Molly. :D


Oh, I spotted a couple typos:

'Eventually, Roses snapped back down to her notes'

'especially when the other wolves saw how useful Cormac’s magic could be to them himself'

'Lifting at the hems of her robes, she made her eay deeper and deeper into the forest'

Sorry, I'm annoyingly nitpicky like that, lol. :D

Author's Response: Well, I have been feeling really inspired as of lately, so I am hoping to finish the last two chapters very soon. I will fix those typos straight away.

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 01/02/10 19:59
Chapter: Chapter 16 The Wand of MacArt

Cliffie. Ten bucks says its that Dugan kid.

Author's Response: No guessing major plot points! It ruins the story for everyone else!

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