Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 13:29
Chapter: Draco's Confession

I mix up characters all the time. I thought Alecto was a guy too because it sounds like a guy's name...

On the other hand, I like how you put Draco's confession in bold. It really emphasized it. Good work!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 13:14
Chapter: Abduction

Good. I really liked the confrontation with Pansy. It just shows how much he cares for Hermione and I'm beginning to think that he is indeed in love with her.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 13:01
Chapter: A Day of Love, A Look of Loathing


Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 12:46
Chapter: The Gown

Out of the 16 chapters I've read, this one is the best. I've never stuck so closely to a fanfic before.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 11:22
Chapter: Dreams, Schemes and Holiday Themes

I forgot to comment on this for the last chapter but it can also apply to this one too. I love Pansy's feelings toward the realtionship and how sneaky she's being about it. Too me it just seems so....Pansy.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 11:01
Chapter: Dear Draco

I'm really impressed. I didn't like the way the relationship unfolded at first but the way you describe feelings and *ahem* scenes have me hooked!!!!!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 10:44
Chapter: The Restricted Section

A bit longer than the other chapters but I held onto every moment of it! I find myself addicted to reading the intimate scenes because they are just so well written!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 10:22
Chapter: Snow Fights And Fevers

So cute! This is the farthest I've ever read into a fanfic. You'd better feel special. Normally I'll read one-shots just because I'm bored.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 10:08
Chapter: Truth Be Told

Definitely addicted. This fanfic is probably the best I've read on this site.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 9:57
Chapter: The Gift

Your writing was a bit shaky in the beginning but when you began to fill out the story a bit, your writing just came...alive

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 9:46
Chapter: Hermione's Tears

Awwwwww! Short but sweet. Still can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 9:33
Chapter: The Unpleasant Surprise

I love how you continue to emphasize that both are falling for each other but the relationship seems a little bit too lustic.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 9:21
Chapter: Falling

YES!!!! I was waiting for something like that to happen. Very, very, very well written. I love this chapter!!!
You've kept me going for eight chapters and I'm not going to stop now!!!!!!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 9:08
Chapter: Live Bait

OMG! I am madly in love with this fanfic. I cannot stop reading it! Help me rehab!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 3:05
Chapter: The Foreshadow

Yep, certainly hanging. I really should stop reading this. It's like an addiction. I want to finish the fanfic......I have to!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 2:52
Chapter: Saved

Getting much better. I noticed your writing gets better as the romance comes in more. That's where your talent truly shines. Such a surprising pairing. I still love it though!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 2:43
Chapter: Journey to the West Wing

You are an awesome writer......I could have a fic writing contest with you...that would be fun as hell!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 2:33
Chapter: Strange Noises

The title is the thing that hooked me actually. I like the story alot and I found a song that describes the first few chapters...

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 2:17
Chapter: Loss of Memory

Awesome! Even better than the first chapter! You're good at building a story that can keep someone up at 12:17 a.m. on a Saturday night!!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 03/28/09 2:09
Chapter: Home for the Holidays

Good. I like the writing and I can't wait to read more!

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