I mix up characters all the time. I thought Alecto was a guy too because it sounds like a guy's name...
On the other hand, I like how you put Draco's confession in bold. It really emphasized it. Good work!
Good. I really liked the confrontation with Pansy. It just shows how much he cares for Hermione and I'm beginning to think that he is indeed in love with her.
Out of the 16 chapters I've read, this one is the best. I've never stuck so closely to a fanfic before.
I forgot to comment on this for the last chapter but it can also apply to this one too. I love Pansy's feelings toward the realtionship and how sneaky she's being about it. Too me it just seems so....Pansy.
I'm really impressed. I didn't like the way the relationship unfolded at first but the way you describe feelings and *ahem* scenes have me hooked!!!!!
A bit longer than the other chapters but I held onto every moment of it! I find myself addicted to reading the intimate scenes because they are just so well written!
So cute! This is the farthest I've ever read into a fanfic. You'd better feel special. Normally I'll read one-shots just because I'm bored.
Definitely addicted. This fanfic is probably the best I've read on this site.
Your writing was a bit shaky in the beginning but when you began to fill out the story a bit, your writing just came...alive
Awwwwww! Short but sweet. Still can't wait to read more.
I love how you continue to emphasize that both are falling for each other but the relationship seems a little bit too lustic.
YES!!!! I was waiting for something like that to happen. Very, very, very well written. I love this chapter!!!
You've kept me going for eight chapters and I'm not going to stop now!!!!!!
OMG! I am madly in love with this fanfic. I cannot stop reading it! Help me rehab!
Yep, certainly hanging. I really should stop reading this. It's like an addiction. I want to finish the fanfic......I have to!
Getting much better. I noticed your writing gets better as the romance comes in more. That's where your talent truly shines. Such a surprising pairing. I still love it though!
You are an awesome writer......I could have a fic writing contest with you...that would be fun as hell!
The title is the thing that hooked me actually. I like the story alot and I found a song that describes the first few chapters...
Awesome! Even better than the first chapter! You're good at building a story that can keep someone up at 12:17 a.m. on a Saturday night!!
Good. I like the writing and I can't wait to read more!
