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Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 13:39 · For: Hold On Hermione
....sigh. I love this pairing way too much for it to be healthy.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 13:29 · For: Draco's Confession
I mix up characters all the time. I thought Alecto was a guy too because it sounds like a guy's name...

On the other hand, I like how you put Draco's confession in bold. It really emphasized it. Good work!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 13:14 · For: Abduction
Good. I really liked the confrontation with Pansy. It just shows how much he cares for Hermione and I'm beginning to think that he is indeed in love with her.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 13:01 · For: A Day of Love, A Look of Loathing
Addicted...


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 12:46 · For: The Gown
Out of the 16 chapters I've read, this one is the best. I've never stuck so closely to a fanfic before.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 11:22 · For: Dreams, Schemes and Holiday Themes
I forgot to comment on this for the last chapter but it can also apply to this one too. I love Pansy's feelings toward the realtionship and how sneaky she's being about it. Too me it just seems so....Pansy.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 11:01 · For: Dear Draco
I'm really impressed. I didn't like the way the relationship unfolded at first but the way you describe feelings and *ahem* scenes have me hooked!!!!!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 10:44 · For: The Restricted Section
A bit longer than the other chapters but I held onto every moment of it! I find myself addicted to reading the intimate scenes because they are just so well written!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 10:22 · For: Snow Fights And Fevers
So cute! This is the farthest I've ever read into a fanfic. You'd better feel special. Normally I'll read one-shots just because I'm bored.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 10:08 · For: Truth Be Told
Definitely addicted. This fanfic is probably the best I've read on this site.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 9:57 · For: The Gift
Your writing was a bit shaky in the beginning but when you began to fill out the story a bit, your writing just came...alive


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 9:46 · For: Hermione's Tears
Awwwwww! Short but sweet. Still can't wait to read more.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 9:33 · For: The Unpleasant Surprise
I love how you continue to emphasize that both are falling for each other but the relationship seems a little bit too lustic.


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 9:21 · For: Falling
YES!!!! I was waiting for something like that to happen. Very, very, very well written. I love this chapter!!!
You've kept me going for eight chapters and I'm not going to stop now!!!!!!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 9:08 · For: Live Bait
OMG! I am madly in love with this fanfic. I cannot stop reading it! Help me rehab!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 3:05 · For: The Foreshadow
Yep, certainly hanging. I really should stop reading this. It's like an addiction. I want to finish the fanfic......I have to!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 2:52 · For: Saved
Getting much better. I noticed your writing gets better as the romance comes in more. That's where your talent truly shines. Such a surprising pairing. I still love it though!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 2:43 · For: Journey to the West Wing
You are an awesome writer......I could have a fic writing contest with you...that would be fun as hell!


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 2:33 · For: Strange Noises
The title is the thing that hooked me actually. I like the story alot and I found a song that describes the first few chapters...


Name: NeverTooLate (Signed) · Date: 03/28/09 2:17 · For: Loss of Memory
Awesome! Even better than the first chapter! You're good at building a story that can keep someone up at 12:17 a.m. on a Saturday night!!


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