isnt there only one invisibility cloak. its one of a kind e.e
I AM NOT PLEASED AT ALL WWWWHHHHYYYY WOULD U DO THIS WWWWHHHHYYYY
WOW Pansy was a mean girl in the books but in this shes a biotch i like it good job :)
DUDE!!!! THAT'S TOTALLY SAD!!!! i hope they get back together in the sequel!!!
The first say, nine chapters, were a little.... iffy. Basic vocabulary, lots of grammatical and spelling errors, not very compelling. But I was determined to finish, hoping that it would get better as it went along. And, oh boy, did it! The storyline was always interesting, and I'm pretty sure I couldn't have clicked the "Next Chapter" button any faster than I did. Can't wait to read the sequel!
geez... do you really have to make this a sad one??? but it's really good... I'm going to read the sequel... I hope it's a happy ending... hehe... tnx for sharing your wonderful story
Just fantastic, Great style, great story, unexpected end, can't wait to read the sequel...
THAT WAS SOOOO SAD!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU?????? This sequel better be good!!!!!!!!!!! i love thisstory!!!!
this is really good well done, i really like it. those last chapters were veryintence it good having the exciting bits then the deep stuf . well done ;)
Hey i love your story so far. Have you read the twilight series? because some of the things you write are very similar to the way stephenie myer writes. thats a good thing . luv it.
what i meant was your fanfic is my favorite on the entire website!
i love your writing, the plot, and the realness of the emotion in the hermione/draco relationship.
i so wish that this was what really happened!
haha malfoy sounds so cute here
thnx 4 da story Clee
lots of luv Annie.
I loved it...totally can't wait to hit up the sequel...=)
DO NOT MAKE ME KILL YOU!!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU WOULD DO THAT!!!!! Sorry. As you can probably tell, I am very pissed. And you may also see that I have left 24 comments precisely. I loved the rest of the story and I hope it rekindles!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of your reviews, they mean a lot to me!
DO NOT MAKE ME KILL YOU!!!!!
Fluff indeed! You really know how to put on a good romance fic! Because I'm quite short on time and need to get some stuff done, I will wait to read the sequel.
I have read over 20 chapters and you think I'm going to stop now? Ha! I love this fic so much.