Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 02/15/08 13:37
Chapter: The Plane Trip

Nice fic!

Ginny shouting in the morning while waking up Lily reminded me of my own mom. Wonder why these women have to shout so much! Lol.

I was just wondering what age Lily and her siblings are in this fic. If Sirius is 6 feet tall, he must be quite grown up. Or am I the only one whos 15 and still not 6 feet?? :(

Anyway, I hope you update soon. This is a very warm and cuddly kinda fic lol...seeing Ginny and Harry as someones parents is very weird though! They were themselves children till yesterday... how I miss those days...

P.S. it's weird but it was only yesterday that I was staring at USAs map in my free time and I particualry looked at Salt Lake, Utah...[I'm not American though] and next day I read this fic and I'm like yay I'm a witch lol. (Did I make any sense?) ....

Author's Response: I have Lily and Sirius as fourth years, and Hermione as a first year. And you're not the only one who is fifteen and under six feet....I'm 5'2" and I'm fifteen as well. I'm glad you liked the fic! Kate

Reviewer: Cascia
Date: 02/15/08 13:35
Chapter: The Plane Trip

good start

Reviewer: darknessofnight
Date: 02/10/08 18:32
Chapter: The Plane Trip

Write more, this is the best!

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 02/10/08 15:50
Chapter: The Plane Trip

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! man i need caffine....Anyway! I NEED @ NO DA REST SIL VOUS PLAIT*!
*french for please*

Reviewer: hermionefan25
Date: 02/10/08 12:48
Chapter: The Plane Trip

I love your story and thank you for agreeing to beta my story I have always like your storys I think there great

hope xx

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 02/08/08 16:09
Chapter: The Plane Trip

dun dun dun good story!! update soon!!

Reviewer: sk8tergirl959
Date: 02/04/08 22:36
Chapter: The Plane Trip

i lov it i lov it i lov it

Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 02/03/08 19:07
Chapter: The Plane Trip

Lovely! Neat first chapter, the over-protective brother is a nice touch.
I loved the Ginny vs. Harry in the beginning, it made me laugh.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
(I also can't wait to see who is going to have the most fun ski-reaming at the top of their lungs while skiing..... hmmm.....I vote Lily......)

Author's Response: Good guess! I'm not telling anything though...you'll find out in chapter 4! GLad you like the story, though. Kate

Reviewer: Pick Up A Potter
Date: 02/03/08 4:18
Chapter: The Plane Trip

Very Good Story

I'll hazard a guess that you are Ameican because you won't find many Brits talking about their 'pants', as over here pants mean underpants. We call them trousers.

But that does not really matter, as it was a very lovely story and I am nitpicking.

All the best!

Reviewer: hermione_granger4life
Date: 02/01/08 15:13
Chapter: The Plane Trip

KATE! I am SO glad this was validated! It's an amazing fic and I can't wait to read the next installment! I was so worried there were little errors I might have missed! Good luck writing the next chapter! :)

**Emma

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 02/01/08 13:17
Chapter: The Plane Trip

I'm back! This was really cute, and I'm really excited for ch 2. I really like how you did Sirius, he's my favorite so far and you can definitely make this get interesting!!! Update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 02/01/08 13:10
Chapter: The Plane Trip

Okay not going to lie, I stopped the second I saw the words "Potter Mansion". Siriusly? All I can think about is Malfoy Mansion. Anyways I'm going to finish reading this story, but I'll be back to give you my reactions.......

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