Reviews For The Women Who Won
Reviewer: Eleanor Lupin
Date: 10/08/11 0:04
Chapter: Alice

Oh, this is awesome awesome awesome! I can't wait for another update! Everyone in every chapter I've read has been characterized perfectly, and the whole thing is just amazing! I'm super excited to read Narcissa's, its really interesting to hear what people think about certain people's endings, and Narcissa is one of my favourite characters. Great story!

Author's Response: Well, I'm over a year late, but thank you for the review! Narcissa's chapter is in the queue. I hope it lives up to your expectations!

Reviewer: gingerslytherin
Date: 02/19/11 11:57
Chapter: Ginny

Aw! Great fluff! You portrayed ginny SO well, especially when she ran into Harry again. I loved their fight, and when Harry said "DID YOU THINK i DIDN'T DIE INSIDE WHEN I HEARD YOU SCREAM MY NAME?" it was so beautiful. The ending, however, was a little further than I thought it should be into unashamed cheeseyness. I'm really excited that Narcissa is up next, because she isn't written about a lot and I'd love to see your vision on what happened to her after the war. Keep writing this story, I love it1

Reviewer: LaBarge
Date: 12/31/10 22:16
Chapter: Andromeda

Woth a review. Very much like I imagine the horrible aftermath of the battle. Not "everything is fine" but a lot of very rough stuff to get through and over. Some things never better like Teddy being an orphan. Good writing.

Reviewer: ravenclaw1997
Date: 12/06/10 9:48
Chapter: Ginny

Aww, I love fluff! This was perfect fluff, too, really well written. I'm melting! :)

This story is great; at first I was like, "Oh no, it's another one of those authors that never posts..." But I really wanted to read it, and I'm glad I did. I'm begging you, though, please update! I completely understand how lives can get busy and that psychotic roommate thing freaked me out, so don't feel like you need to get a new chapter out every day or something stupid like that. I love updates, though. :)

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the chance to read this! I really do appreciate it. : ) I don't feel like I write fluff very well, so it's wonderful to hear that my readers disagree! Just to let you know, the Narcissa chapter is in the queue, but it may be a while for the others. I'm currently a full-time college student, and next semester I will start student teaching. School has caused me to put every project on hold! The only chapters left in this story are those for Luna, Molly, and Hermione. Molly and Hermione are mostly written, but Luna is giving me a run for my money! However, I do think I will have this story finished in the near future. Stay tuned! ~Kaitlin

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 12/05/10 15:44
Chapter: Ginny

wow i really like this story! The first two chapters were heartbreaking (as they should be) and Ginny's was so sweet - I loved Harry's awkwardness when he said he loved her! I'm looking forward to seeing what other women you choose to right about (although the other chapters were great so I almost want more chapters about them as well!) great job and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! The chapter about Narcissa is in the queue, and I am currently working on chapters for Luna, Molly Weasley, and Hermione. After that the story will be finished. I feel like I could write more, but I don't think it would add anything! However, I have a couple of irons in the fire that I might get the chance to work on during my breaks. Hopefully they'll satisfy some of the need for more!

Reviewer: hermy008
Date: 12/04/10 10:07
Chapter: Alice

god, that was incredibly sad and beatiful at the same time. i almost cried, when she remembered him and forgot again when she was so close...absolutely heartbreaking, but that works for this chapter. very very very good! :D

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 12/04/10 7:53
Chapter: Andromeda

Oh wow, this is awesome! Now I am all teary eyed! I love the strength you gave Andromeda. Nevery gave it much thought, but she would have been a very strong woman, to defy her family and marry Ted. And the chapter on Alice - broke my heart. Of course, loved your chapter on Harry & Ginny - what a lovely way for their reunion. Please keep writing - can't wait to see what is next! Debbie

Reviewer: eniroc
Date: 12/03/10 15:38
Chapter: Alice

I am glad you are returning to continue this fic. I love your take on all of the three so far. Poor Alice no memory but a son that loves her so much. I really love the interaction between Molly and Andromeda, two mothers mourning together. The scene between Ginny and Minerva was a real treat. I can't wait to read Hermione and Narcissa. You do a wonderful job, the stories are well written and moving. Please keep up the good work. Oh and stay away from roommates with guns!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shineonme85
Date: 05/17/10 20:37
Chapter: Ginny

You are so creative and I really enjoyed reading this! Wonderful imagine and well written. I hope to read more from you!

Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to update and respond. Life has been incredibly crazy! Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked the imagery; that and characterization are the two things I am trying the most to work on. I hope you like the rest of the chapters!

Reviewer: Sly One
Date: 04/19/08 17:46
Chapter: Ginny

Oh man, Oh man, OH man! Artistry on display in here! Thats all I can say. I've been through the aftermath of death and I can verify that mix of guilt, pain, elation and confusion is perfectly described. Considering the last chapter you wrote, I have to say you've got something here! Please keep it going for all our sakes.

Author's Response: This is one of the best reviews I've received; thank you so much! I had a hard time putting those indescribable feelings onto paper; I'm glad to know I succeeded. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 04/01/08 14:56
Chapter: Ginny

Very cute! I really enjoyed reading this, and the last line was perfect.
My only comment is that I don't think Ginny would be so shocked to realize that she loves Harry. She's liked him for years, and I think she would have come to that realization before this point.
Having said that, I don't think that one paragraph took anything away from the story. I hope you're having better luck with the writing.
Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I also had trouble with that paragraph, but my reasoning is that, while some people may gradually realize that they're in love, for others it might hit them like lightning. And I am almost, *almost* done with Andromeda, so I hope an update will be up soon. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 03/22/08 16:13
Chapter: Ginny

Obviously fluffier than Alice. Also well written. I think that this story was a clever idea. Andromeda's going to be interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. All the lovely reviews have encouraged me to keep writing, even as Andromeda and Molly have taken over my life. I hope I meet your expectations with the next chapter!

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 03/22/08 16:00
Chapter: Alice

Well written, and thought out.

Reviewer: suzyfloozy
Date: 03/13/08 5:43
Chapter: Ginny

I really enjoyed this chapter. It actually moved me to tears, mainly because I have often wondered what Ginny's take on Harry's 'abandonment' of her was and how they were able to resolve their feelings in the aftermath of the war. I really look forward to Hermione's chapter.

Any plans for a 'The Men who Won'?

Author's Response: I've thought about it...but I'll have to finish this story first. And thank you for the review; I am happy people actually like this chapter!

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 03/02/08 7:05
Chapter: Ginny

its a shame we didnt see the aftermath of the battle

i love ginnys fierey temper =]

Author's Response: More is coming. It's taken me forever, but I finally *almost* have Andromeda's chapter ready to post. I also *might* have another story coming soon...we shall see! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 03/02/08 6:54
Chapter: Alice

i think Alice is quite neglected in fictions unless its a hogwarts one so this was actually a nice change and well written too =]
thankyou =]=]=]

Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for reviewing. Hopefully I'll have more soon!

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 03/01/08 4:53
Chapter: Ginny

I loved both of the chapters, but definitely this one the best, and I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this chapter. I was afraid people wouldn't, as it is so different from the first, all you reviewers have allayed my fears. Thank you very much, and hopefully I'll have the rest ready to put up by the time the queue opens!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 02/27/08 19:54
Chapter: Ginny

Ooooh!! I really like this!! Very nicely done!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I'll have the next chapter ready by the time the queue opens...

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 02/26/08 20:00
Chapter: Ginny

*sniff* yay!! i love it when harry and ginny get back together in fics!! heh heh, can you tell i'm a huge h/g shipper?? great chapter! i think it was very realistic!! update soon!!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you thought it was realistic. I was afraid it wouldn't be! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: elevenses
Date: 02/26/08 14:40
Chapter: Ginny

Very nicely written. I could just "see" Ginny and Harry. Keep up the good work. Will you be doing one on Hermione as well?

Author's Response: Yes, a chapter on Hermione will be up eventually. Thank you for the review! I'm glad you could "see" the characters; that was my intention!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.