Reviews For Hope For Someday
Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/24/08 16:57
Chapter: Hope For Someday

How sweet! It's nice to think that they could have made things right before Lily and James were killed.
One or two things. You called Lily Lillian a few times, and the last few paragraphs are italicized, and I don't they were supposed to be.
Other than that, Great Job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, HC! And I really appreciate you pointing out my errors -- I've corrected them now. =) Thank you for the review as well! ~GG

Reviewer: hsmfanatic
Date: 01/23/08 19:15
Chapter: Hope For Someday

I'm not gonna cry...I'm nto gonna cry...*starts bawling at top of lungs*

Thta was so sad! Mainly because you know what's gonna happen. That Severus actually betrayed Lily. That they died before their next Christmas. That Snape and James, judging by the former's comments, never did reconcile. Awesome job, 10/10! I see you've gotten really into the J/L/S triangle sicne DH came out.

P.S. I think you made an error at one point, and referred to Lily as Lillian - I'm guessing you just got used to writing that!

Author's Response: Aww *pets* Don't cry... =) It is sad, isn't it? The whole thing just makes me want to bawl, so I try not to think about it too much, lol. And yeah, I really have been in a J/S/L thing recently, haven't I? It's just so complicated it's really easy to write drama about. Thank you for finding the errors that I made! *is embarrassed and needs to pay more attention* :D ~GG

Reviewer: Amethyst_Magic
Date: 01/23/08 18:09
Chapter: Hope For Someday

This is a very sweet story, and it makes James and Lily's deaths even more bittersweet. At the end, I think you forgot to go back to non-italicized text, just so you know. Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! And thanks for letting me know about the italics. I'll go and fix it! :) ~GG

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/23/08 17:11
Chapter: Hope For Someday

Great one shot! I love reading about Lily, James and Severus and this was a very interesting spin on thier lives ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you, I really like exploring their relationships too! And thanks for the review. :) ~GG

Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 01/23/08 17:09
Chapter: Hope For Someday

I like it. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you! ~GG

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