how do you find your novel can you link it ?
I really thought this to be well written. I was hoping to find the rest of it. What is the title on ff.net?
wow. awsome. ten out of ten. love how you captured snape's emotions &his struggle not to let them show.
please finish... im dying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting story! I am very curious as to what will happen next?!
Very well written, and there is no better word for it-Captivating.
Wow great start! Very suspenseful!!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
great so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. very literate on your part. describing snapes reactions on the subject. I was a bit confused at first about snape and the order, but you cleared that up.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks. Sorry for the confusion - I realized after I had written the whole thing that maybe it wasn't as clear as I'd thought it was. Hope you keep reading!
more more please more
Author's Response: Here is more! Enjoy.
Wow, this is pretty good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: I've glad you've liked it; the new chapter's up so I hope you like it.
This is good. Lucius makes me twinge, all the more reason why I wish they hadn't cast Isaacs for his role. I love Isaacs. Lucius can keep his own lips busy with himself.
Author's Response: Haha, I agree. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you continue to read! New chap up.
I knew he was in the Order, so the fact that he joined his Death Eater comrades was'nt lost on me. He is Dumbledor's spy and he must be careful.
I admire Snape's feelings for Hermione Granger, as the Dark Lord talked about kidnapping her and her dad.
I really like the chapter, and the story as well. I look forward to more, hopefully soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad the whole 'Snape lying' was confusing to everyone. Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to read!
Excellent first chapter! I can't wait for the next :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Ch. 2 is up and Ch. 3 should be there soon enough....hope you enjoy!
hehehe. i can practically feel the anger rolling of sev. Poor guy, i only hope he can save hermione and maybe her parents. ha. i had forgotten how good of a liar he was until you mentioned the whole thing about the Order. very well written, can't wait till the next chapter =]
Author's Response: I'm glad the emotion came off allright - sometimes I honestly can't tell. Being self-objective is really not my forte. Thanks for the review, gad you enjoyed, and I hope you like the new chapter.
hehehe. i can practically feel the anger rolling of sev. Poor guy, i only hope he can save hermione and maybe her parents. ha. i had forgotten how good of a liar he was until you mentioned the whole thing about the Order. very well written, can't wait till the next chapter =]
Author's Response: I'm glad the emotion came off allright - sometimes I honestly can't tell. Being self-objective is really not my forte. Thanks for the review, gad you enjoyed, and I hope you like the new chapter.
i enjoyed this story please continue
Author's Response: Continued! Ch. 2 up!
i enjoyed this story please continue
Author's Response: Continued! Ch. 2 up!
