Reviews For Great Expectations
Reviewer: devil_duckling
Date: 06/07/08 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

Are you going to write about Albus' quest? Please do!!! You need to write a sequel!!!

Author's Response: I haven't decided if I'm going to write a sequel yet. I think I need to put a little distance between this story and wherever my Muse takes me next, though. Then we'll see. Thanks for the compliment, though!

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 06/07/08 7:09
Chapter: Chapter 23: Albus

Wonderful chapter, really movng

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 06/06/08 16:55
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

*sniff* that poor other mother! i forgot her name.... anyway... good chapter!

Author's Response: Her name was Meghan. Thanks for your kind words.

Reviewer: elevenses
Date: 06/06/08 15:10
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

Another beautiful chapter. I felt as though I were in the NICU with Ginny, everything was so vivid. Excelent chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, that's very flattering. I appreciate your review.

Reviewer: Nunuz
Date: 06/06/08 4:00
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

Magnificent chapter, can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to get the next chapter posted soon.

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93
Date: 06/06/08 1:12
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

yet another great chapter!!!! please hurry in finishing the next one, i barely made it between the last one and this one, so for my own health i hope u upload again soon. honestly, i think im addicted to this fic :)

Author's Response: My goodness! You barely made it? I'll write as fast as I can, but it may be awhile yet. Because of other obligations it generally takes me a week or two to get through one chapter, but so far this one is coming pretty quickly so hopefully it won't be too long.

Reviewer: obsessionhp
Date: 06/05/08 23:12
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

wonderful as usual!! keep it coming!! as far as i'm concerned you can write about the Potter's until Albus and James have kids!!

Author's Response: Wow! That's quite a tall order, but we'll see how it goes. Thanks so much.rnrn

Reviewer: nalaniekeala
Date: 06/05/08 19:33
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

Wonderful chapter. You certainly got the intrinsics of a NICU down. I feel so bad for Meghan though. Ginny should suggest that she and Phil take a vacation to the Rose Cottage!

Author's Response: I've had friends and relatives who have been through this experience, and I did do a bit of research on it too. Good suggestion for Meghan and Phil. Thanks so much for your comments.

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 06/05/08 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

awe the poor little guy... they've all had a rough fight... as always, good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm at work on the next chapter now and hope to have it posted soon.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/05/08 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

This chapter was so beautiful and so sad! Poor Ginny must be so worried about Albus, and I bet Hermione is getting plenty worried about Rose just from pre-birth worries. Write fast please, and update soon! And I'm very glad to hear that you are reconsidering posting more stories on mugglenet.

Author's Response: Well, you know Hermione. She's a worrier by nature, and add Lavender Brown to the mix and that's just a nightmare. I don't care how confident a woman is, her husband's old girlfriends always bring out all her insecurities. Thanks so much for your comments.

Reviewer: halamo
Date: 06/05/08 15:31
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

wow ;)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/05/08 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

Absolutely wonderful. The entire chapter from beginning to end was beautiful. I love references to poems, quotes, songs etc especially in this fic as you really know how to fit them in naturally so it all flows together. It was awful when Abeona died, it must be the worst thing in the world to lose a child. I'm sad to know there are only a couple of chapters left to come, as I've thoroughly enjoyed this fic, but I'll be sure to make the most of them. Thanks for such a brilliant story.

Author's Response: The next chapter is turning out to be a lot longer than I thought, so I may have to break it up into two. We'll see h ow it goes. Thanks so much for your very kin words. Indeed, I think the worst thing that could possibly happen to any parent is to lose a child. I can't imagine anything more horrible. Thank you again for your lovely review.

Reviewer: gryffindorboi
Date: 06/05/08 9:17
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

This story is fantastic. That's all I can say. I love it and can't wait for the rest. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on the next chapter now and will try to get it posted soon.

Reviewer: Gin_Wazlib
Date: 06/05/08 8:49
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

so nice. I love that lullaby, I sang it when I was in choir in high school! I wish you fast fingers and free flowing thoughts as you finish this story!

Author's Response: I like that lullaby too. It's quite beautiful when sung properly (which Harry apparently didn't do, but I'm sure it was heartfelt). Thanks so much.

Reviewer: nits
Date: 06/05/08 5:39
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

awesome!! like i said. worth the wait..

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks!

Reviewer: sophiewalpole
Date: 06/05/08 4:21
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

in my first reveiw i mentioned that it was hard for myself to concieve like Hermione and Ron, and this story has restored my faith in that it will take time, and someday it will happen.

Author's Response: Okay, now I remember. I hope it will happen for you as well. One thing I've learned throughout my life, which has been filled with many disappointments and not a few heartaches, is that we are in this life to learn and one of those lessons is that whatever is was meant to be. I often think of a line from the Desiderata: "You are a child of the Universe. No less than the trees and the stars, you have a right to be here; and whether or not it is clear to you, no doubt the Universe is unfolding as it should." It's a hard thing to accept sometimes, but utlimately it's true. Thanks for your comments, and hang onto that faith of yours. Whatever happens will be right, I'm sure of it.

Reviewer: sophiewalpole
Date: 06/05/08 4:19
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

im loving this chapter, i cried yet again when the little baby girl died, keep it up and thankyou again

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry I made you cry!

Reviewer: misey
Date: 06/05/08 2:29
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

you are absolutely know that? I have read so many fics about Harry and Ginny after the war but none of them was this good.Pleeeeeeease keep going until they are gray :D update soon

Author's Response: Thank you very much, and I will take your recommendation under advisement.

Reviewer: montse
Date: 06/05/08 0:09
Chapter: Chapter 23: Albus

Hey Mrs. Cassandras cross its me again!! :p just to let you know that all of us humble muggles are trying to read chappie 24 as you said its up, but we cant see it... :'( can you please upload it again or something?? tnx!

Author's Response: It's not me, it's the site. Apparently this story is so poular that the server keeps crashing whenever they send out email alerts. They are aware of it and have to wait until a "master" mod can upload it manually - whatever that means. If you send an email to it might hurry them along a little bit.

Reviewer: sophiewalpole
Date: 06/04/08 16:00
Chapter: Chapter 23: Albus


after becoming up to date with this story so far that is all i can say. i actually cried a person who does not cry that often at things like this and you made it happen. i can't truly believe that this baby will be ok, but you have restored my faith in many things by writing this story.

you may remember what i told you ain my first review, well nothing in that has changed except my faith that one day it will eventually happen, i thank you for this.

Author's Response: I don't recall what you said in your first review. Could you remind me? I'm glad I've restored your faith. If this chapter made you cry, however, the next one is probably going to tear your heart out, because it's really sad. The one after that is quite lighthearted, though. I'm still working on that one, but so far it's turning out to be quite funny. Thanks so much for your comments.

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