Reviews For Great Expectations
Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 12/29/11 5:34
Chapter: Chapter 8: The Name Game

Lily and James Potter? Or just lily ?

Reviewer: Harrypotterlover1
Date: 10/12/11 2:52
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

Love it!!!

Reviewer: Harrypotterlover1
Date: 10/11/11 21:20
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Rose Line

Their last name is Cattermole, not Sinclair!

Reviewer: AussiePotter
Date: 06/24/11 6:11
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

I just found this story again and HAD to read it a second time because i got so caught up in the storyline! It is wonderfully written and I enjoyed it alot. How I love Harry and Ginny and I loved how the last chapter showed them more in their roles as parents. Awesome job :)
AussiePotter :)

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/25/11 14:15
Chapter: Chapter 8: The Name Game

someone from the future???

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/24/11 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Rose Line

i would consider making james a little bit older unless they get pregnant in about a yar in to the story. it fits canon better

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/11/11 21:51
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

I love! love! LOVE

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/10/11 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 13: Fireworks

I thought that this chapter did have a lot of fluff... AND I LOVED IT!!!! You really should write a book one day. :D

Reviewer: ravenclaw1997
Date: 11/28/10 14:46
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

This was even better than The Letter! You really do have a gift with writing! I look forward to a sequel, which I am now begging you to write. PLEASE?!?! *puppy eyes*

Again, the perfect balance of fluff and mystery. Some of your 'sevens' were hard to guess, and it was clever that you had them at all.

I forgot to mention this when I reviewed The Letter, but your OC's all have wonderful names, and I think the way you connected their names to their personalities was brilliant.

Your plot in this one was perfectly thought out, just like The Letter. It had me guessing until the end! Rose Cottage's mysteriousness was perfect, and Albus' was as well. You captured everything perfectly.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future, and hopefully that will include a sequel to this! *begs again* I have cookies!!

Reviewer: CoalBlackCat
Date: 02/28/10 11:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Wistful Looks

this story was truly Incredable! Easily the best fan fiction on the web. I Really enjoyed reading this and I want to thank You for writing it! Will there be anymore stories from you? Youve probably heard that question a million times but I really really hope that there will be a sequel! Great job xxx

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 12/29/09 12:50
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

All I can say is two thumbs up. Plus my two big toes.

Reviewer: lunagemini
Date: 11/28/09 23:43
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

I really enjoyed your story!

Reviewer: lunagemini
Date: 11/28/09 0:56
Chapter: Chapter 14: All is Well

If you look at the family tree on Jo's website it is clearly Asteria because, in all the other names on it that you already know her o's are clearly o's so it has to be an e just compare it and you will see what I mean! Also if you look up the names Asteria and Astoria, Asteria is the daughter of the Titan Coeus in greek mythology (and Hyperion, her and Malfoy's sons middle name, is the name of one of the Titans) while Astoria only comes up as the name of towns and other random things like that, so knowing that Jo's names always have meaning to them there is no doubt that her name is Asteria and not Astoria!

Reviewer: Member of the DA
Date: 07/30/09 12:37
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later


Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 07/08/09 15:24
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

Amazing! Absolutly perfect! My beloved story, the best one I ever read! (Its the third time i read it =)) It is so breathtaking, so deep!... I enjoyd very much.
I also read "The Letter", and I think you are a very talented author! I hope you will be writing more stories which I'm sure to read with amusement.

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 05/31/09 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: Wistful Looks

I have a question. I'm in a Being British class on the 'Oh, so famous' forums and I site your story as an example for doo study reading.

But our teacher also wants to include the author's nationality. Would you like to devulge this piece of information? Pretty please!


Author's Response: Hi, Olive Oil. Sorry it's taken me so long to answer your question. I've been computer-less for awhile. I am American, by the way. Always have been. I've never lived in England either, though I've had quite a few English friends.

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 05/21/09 18:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Wistful Looks

You didn't know that your story won an award? Well, it did, and you shouldn't be shocked, because it is amazing!

Also, as one of the winners, you do get a lovely award banner from the site. So if you don't have an account, you better create one so that you can claim your prize. And how could you not know what the Beta Boards are? There's a link to them right off to the side. You would love it too! Everyone one there is obsessive about becoming better writiers, and it's more or less all we talk about.

Oh! It's sad to see that you're taking a break from fanfiction, but wonderful to hear that you're still writing. I'll have to keep an eye out in the book stores and see if I can recognize your style in anything.

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 04/13/09 0:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: Wistful Looks

So many congratulations on winning runner up for the QSQ awards! Will you be writing more stories soon. We're running out of honors for you.

Are you and the beards? Do you know anyone on the borads? What House to do belong to?

Author's Response: No, I'm not on the boards (in fact, I'm not even sure what that is!). Also, I was unaware that I was even up for an award, so thanks for letting me know! I am not writing more fanfics at the moment, as I'm concentrating on non-HP fiction, but thanks so much for the vote of confidence and for your kind words. Take care!

Reviewer: Lazy Lazuli
Date: 01/24/09 3:37
Chapter: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

Well, I'm finally reviewing this, after reading so long! POINTS:

~ Nice use of dawlish in certain chapters. I considered both Dawlish and Dolohov to be a little literary figure with a name I made up, IC, which stands for Immortal casualty. Basically, these characters never die, but are always there to either hurt or put in a hospital to emphasize a battle. I always have fun playing with ICs. strangely enough, I can't stop introducing it as "IC, the immortal casaulty"

~You know, this is a very wonderful fic and all, but I really don't like it when people keep putting so much emphasis on Albus. There are other children too! Also, nothing special is given about Albus during JK's epilogue. In fact, no offense, but I take him to be just a bit whiny.

Reviewer: recklesshero12
Date: 12/18/08 8:09
Chapter: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

Amazing story.  I definitely want to read the sequel!  Where can I find it, please?

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